GRE作文入门和进阶二十四
<p> （病历文）</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span>， <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="leading">leading</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="estate">estate</span> <span word="firms">firms</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="town">town</span>， <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sell">sell</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="homes">homes</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Fitch">Fitch</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="leading">leading</span> <span word="one">one</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="justify">justify</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span> <span word="has">has</span> 40 <span word="real">real</span> <span word="estate">estate</span> <span word="agents">agents</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> 25 <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Fitch">Fitch</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>， <span word="he">he</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Fitch">Fitch</span>， <span word="which">which</span> <span word="respectively">respectively</span> <span word="are">are</span> $168，000 <span word="and">and</span> $144，000. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="conceivable">conceivable</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="lists">lists</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="exhibit">exhibit</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="superior">superior</span> <span word="sell">sell</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Fitch">Fitch</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evidences">evidences</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="seem">seem</span> <span word="reasonable">reasonable</span>， <span word="a">a</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="examination">examination</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="reveal">reveal</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="groundless">groundless</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="unfairly">unfairly</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Fitchs">Fitchs</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="agents">agents</span>， <span word="more">more</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span>. <span word="The">The</span> 40 <span word="agents">agents</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="poorly">poorly</span> <span word="trained">trained</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unqualified">unqualified</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span> <span word="low">low</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>， <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="enlarging">enlarging</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="agents">agents</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="feasible">feasible</span> <span word="compensation">compensation</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="Fitchs">Fitchs</span> 25 <span word="agents">agents</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="trained">trained</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>， <span word="although">although</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span>， <span word="under">under</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="enough">enough</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="oversimplified">oversimplified</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="factor">factor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employees">employees</span>， <span word="which">which</span>， <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="sense">sense</span>， <span word="has">has</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="correlation">correlation</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>， <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="reputation">reputation</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="feedbacks">feedbacks</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="spiritual">spiritual</span>， <span word="to">to</span> <span word="avoid">avoid</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="unwarranted">unwarranted</span>.</p>
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