名师点评网友BEC初级作文(2)
<p> 本期作文题目：</p><p> <span word="Formulate">Formulate</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="policy">policy</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="fair">fair</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="smokers">smokers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="nonsmokers">nonsmokers</span>. <span word="Write">Write</span> <span word="a">a</span> 40-50 <span word="word">word</span> <span word="memo">memo</span> <span word="informing">informing</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="policy">policy</span>.</p><p> 提示：</p><p> 我们需要确定，如果我是公司职员，我要在这篇<span word="memo">memo</span>中获得什么信息?是不是要知道：</p><p> 1.新的吸烟政策从什么时候开始;</p><p> 2.吸烟区划定在什么地方?</p><p> 网友作文一：</p><p> <span word="TO">TO</span>: <span word="All">All</span> <span word="Employees">Employees</span></p><p> <span word="FROM">FROM</span>: <span word="CEO">CEO</span>, <span word="Willan">Willan</span> <span word="Smith">Smith</span></p><p> <span word="SUBJECT">SUBJECT</span>: <span word="NEW">NEW</span> <span word="SMOKING">SMOKING</span> <span word="POLICY">POLICY</span></p><p> <span word="For">For</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="employees">employees</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="smokers">smokers</span>, <span word="plz">plz</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="policy">policy</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="formulated">formulated</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="follow">follow</span>: <span word="A">A</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="restricted">restricted</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="Next">Next</span> <span word="MONDAY">MONDAY</span>, <span word="anyone">anyone</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="smoker">smoker</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="zone">zone</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="washing">washing</span> <span word="room">room</span>.</p><p> <span word="Plz">Plz</span> <span word="target">target</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="stick">stick</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="policy">policy</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thx">Thx</span>.</p><p> 名师指导：</p><p> 去掉，抬头已经写过给所有的员工，所以直接从正文开始就行了，费这个事干什么?</p><p> 时间不确切，最好是 <span word="from">from</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="Monday">Monday</span>. <span word="Before">Before</span> 这个期限是什么时候?如果不能给出确切信息，就不要说，还不如换成具体的吸烟区域更好: <span word="be">be</span> <span word="restricted">restricted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="room">room</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="toilet">toilet</span>.</p>
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