The opinion of volunteer
<p><span word="E">E</span>度英语网专稿 未经允许不得转载</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Volunteer">Volunteer</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="wonderful">wonderful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="occupation">occupation</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span> . <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="itis">itis</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="gets">gets</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span>. </p><p> <span word="But">But</span> <span word="someone">someone</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="thinks">thinks</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="awastes">awastes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span>. <span word="Maybe">Maybe</span>, <span word="something">something</span> <span word="else">else</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="worthdoing">worthdoing</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="earn">earn</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="voluntary">voluntary</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span>.<span word="they">they</span> <span word="said">said</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="honest">honest</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="views">views</span>. <span word="Obviously">Obviously</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="selfish">selfish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="owning">owning</span> <span word="now">now</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> ,<span word="To">To</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span> <span word="isa">isa</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="wayfor">wayfor</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enioy">enioy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="colorful">colorful</span> <span word="life">life</span> , <span word="it">it</span> <span word="whichis">whichis</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span>, <span word="good">good</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span>. <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="over">over</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friends">friends</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="enrichs">enrichs</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> ,<span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="usmake">usmake</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="please">please</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="act">act</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="selfish">selfish</span> <span word="motives">motives</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="chinese">chinese</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="tells">tells</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="GOOD">GOOD</span> <span word="MIND">MIND</span>,<span word="GOOD">GOOD</span> <span word="FIND">FIND</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="ambition">ambition</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p>本文讨论了参与是否参与志愿工作的话题，从正反两个方面来论证，论点清晰，结构清楚。引入-反驳-论证-升华的套路放在这里很实用，希望继续发扬。但是用词较为生硬，有少量语法错误，希望继续改进。</p><p><span word="Jack">Jack</span> 张</p><p>批改老师：<span word="Jack">Jack</span> 张</p>
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