实例分析：别让小错误毁了你的雅思写作
<p> 明明都背了那么多范文和模板，写了这么多习作，但雅思写作为什么还是5分？我都这么努力了，考官他不造吗！</p><p> 【学生习作节选】</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enhancement">enhancement</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="services">services</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="allocate">allocate</span> <span word="fund">fund</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="waste">waste</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="controversial">controversial</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="public">public</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="vital">vital</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="spending">spending</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="definitely">definitely</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="waste">waste</span> <span word="money">money</span>。</p><p> 不看不知道，一看吓一跳！这短短3句话共53词的开头段里，密布着8处语法错误，这在雅思写作评分标准中的 语法准确性一条上自然会大打折扣。</p><p> 下面我们就挨个来八一八这些看似微小，但却决定了雅思写作成败的细节问题，也请各位烤鸭对号入座！</p><p> 【细节一】冠词的使用</p><p> 1. 原文：<span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="ofpeople">ofpeople</span>.。.</p><p> 诊断：元音单词<span word="increasing">increasing</span>前的不定冠词应用<span word="an">an</span>而不是<span word="a">a</span>。这样的错误在口语中不容易犯，但写到纸上时就容易忽视。所以说，写完的作文不仅要重看，更要重读，才能借助语感揪出这样的小错误。</p><p> 修改：<span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="ofpeople">ofpeople</span>.。.</p><p> 2. 原文：<span word="However">However</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span>... <span word="on">on</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="controversial">controversial</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>。</p>
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