“烤鸭”必读：雅思高分作文的十大特征
<p> ① 淡化模板痕迹：避免使用<span word="clich">clich</span>：不要上来就写<span word="every">every</span> <span word="coin">coin</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="sides">sides</span>：不要上来就写<span word="every">every</span> <span word="coin">coin</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="sides">sides</span>. / <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="widely">widely</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span> / <span word="as">as</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="know">know</span> 括号里的表达法推荐使用。</p><p> ② 大量的使用了形式主语和灵活句式：</p><p> 例如</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="stressed">stressed</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> 必须强调指出</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="fairly">fairly</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="completely">completely</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="conceivable">conceivable</span> <span word="that">that</span> 可以想象</p><p> ③ 首段一般是：1)改写题目，介绍文章背景;2)提出争议焦点;3)明确表明作家的观点</p><p> ④ 1)再解释2)举例子3)反证法是展开分论点的三个重要的方法</p><p> 1). 再解释：<span word="In">In</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="words">words</span> ;<span word="To">To</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="specific">specific</span>=<span word="specifically">specifically</span> ;<span word="That">That</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="say">say</span></p><p> 2). 举例子：<span word="To">To</span> <span word="illustrate">illustrate</span> ;<span word="A">A</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> ;<span word="An">An</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> 3). 反证法：<span word="While">While</span> ;<span word="Conversely">Conversely</span> ;<span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span></p><p> ⑤ 有3-5个亮点的词汇或是短语</p><p> <span word="Optimize">Optimize</span> 使得最优化= <span word="improve">improve</span></p><p> <span word="Gorgeous">Gorgeous</span> 美丽的 = <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span></p><p> <span word="Maximize">Maximize</span> 使最大化= <span word="Multiply">Multiply</span></p><p> ⑥ 一般的思路是1)客观平衡写 2)让步支持或是让步反驳 3)分析问题解决问题，并且在尾段明确提出观点，也可以提出建议。</p>
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