雅思作文评分标准四个方面及高分范文
<p> 考试的评分标准包括四个方面：</p><p> <span word="Task">Task</span> <span word="Response">Response</span></p><p> <span word="Coherence">Coherence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Cohesion">Cohesion</span></p><p> <span word="Lexical">Lexical</span> <span word="Resource">Resource</span></p><p> <span word="Grammatical">Grammatical</span> <span word="Range">Range</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Accuracy">Accuracy</span></p><p> 雅思的4<span word="Gates">Gates</span>就是其评分标准，分别为内容，逻辑结构，语法的准确使用和范围以及词汇量四个标准。根据下面的全面修改案例，读者可以清楚的看到一篇5.5分的雅思范文是如何在修改之前蜕变成为高分作品。</p><p> <span word="Cambridge">Cambridge</span> 8 <span word="Test">Test</span> 2</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="interact">interact</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="affected">affected</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="types">types</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="relationships">relationships</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="make">make</span>?</p><p> <span word="Has">Has</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="development">development</span>?</p><p> 原文：</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="interact">interact</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yes">Yes</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="interaction">interaction</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="enhanced">enhanced</span> <span word="manner">manner</span>. <span word="Earlier">Earlier</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wait">wait</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="easy">easy</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="contact">contact</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="relatives">relatives</span> <span word="leaving">leaving</span> <span word="far">far</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="quick">quick</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="contact">contact</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="person">person</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="drawback">drawback</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="systems">systems</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="slow">slow</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="telegrams">telegrams</span>, <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="etc">etc</span>. <span word="People">People</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="feedbacks">feedbacks</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="insecure">insecure</span> <span word="medium">medium</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="level">level</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="privacy">privacy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="accuracy">accuracy</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="maintain">maintain</span> <span word="but">but</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="secure">secure</span> <span word="communications">communications</span>.</p>
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