雅思写作5分范文与7分范文对比
<p> <span word="Lets">Lets</span> <span word="compare">compare</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="answers">answers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="question">question</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="follows">follows</span>:</p><p> <span word="International">International</span> <span word="tourism">tourism</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="enormous">enormous</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="places">places</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="impact">impact</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="inhabitants">inhabitants</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="tourism">tourism</span> <span word="outweigh">outweigh</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span>?</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="Poor">Poor</span> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> - <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="band">band</span> 5 <span word="essay">essay</span>.</p><p> <span word="International">International</span> <span word="tourism">tourism</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="enormous">enormous</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="places">places</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="impact">impact</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="inhabitants">inhabitants</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="tourism">tourism</span> <span word="outweigh">outweigh</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span>?</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="outweight">outweight</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="Egypt">Egypt</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Tailand">Tailand</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="tourism">tourism</span> <span word="Lots">Lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="seilsmens">seilsmens</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="tourist">tourist</span> <span word="guides">guides</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tourists">tourists</span> <span word="wouldnt">wouldnt</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="funtcion">funtcion</span> <span word="properly">properly</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="visited">visited</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="tourists">tourists</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="plenty">plenty</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="pass">pass</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="rare">rare</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="plants">plants</span>.</p><p> <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="seeing">seeing</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="exotic">exotic</span> <span word="places">places</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="lie">lie</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beach">beach</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="swim">swim</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="ocean">ocean</span>.</p><p> <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="tourism">tourism</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="highering">highering</span> <span word="tousands">tousands</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="makeing">makeing</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="fun">fun</span>.</p><p> <span word="But">But</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="forget">forget</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="arent">arent</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="beings">beings</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="planet">planet</span>.</p>
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