雅思写作思路透析：是否该禁止不必要的航空旅行
<p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span>：</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="long">long</span>-<span word="distance">distance</span> <span word="flight">flight</span> <span word="consumes">consumes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fuel">fuel</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="car">car</span> <span word="consumes">consumes</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="causes">causes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="cars">cars</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="abandon">abandon</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="fights">fights</span> , <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="restricting">restricting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="car">car</span> <span word="use">use</span>. <span word="Give">Give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> 接下来分析一下这道题目，应该说上过我的作文课的学生会发现这次的题目不难写，因为我在课上重点分析过类似的题目。从结构上来说，这个题目毫无疑问适合用三对一结构来进行写作。以下为参考结构：</p><p> 第一段：开头段</p><p> <span word="Introduce">Introduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span></p><p> <span word="Statement">Statement</span></p><p> 第二段：让步段</p><p> 第三段：重点段</p><p> 第一句：过渡句</p><p> 第二句：分论点一</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="practice">practice</span> <span word="potentially">potentially</span> <span word="hinders">hinders</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>.</p><p> 第三句: <span word="Theoretical">Theoretical</span> <span word="Evidence">Evidence</span></p><p> <span word="Abandonning">Abandonning</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="flight">flight</span>-<span word="Employees">Employees</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="fileds">fileds</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="tourist">tourist</span> <span word="guides">guides</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="likelty">likelty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="unemployed">unemployed</span>-<span word="Soaring">Soaring</span> <span word="unemployement">unemployement</span> <span word="rate">rate</span>-<span word="Economic">Economic</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span></p><p> 第四句: 分论点二</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="practice">practice</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="disaster">disaster</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="relies">relies</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="tourism">tourism</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="extent">extent</span>.</p><p> 第五句：<span word="Case">Case</span> <span word="Evidence">Evidence</span></p>
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