雅思写作范文：年轻人崇拜明星
<p> 写作题目</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="admiring">admiring</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="stars">stars</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="example">example</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="development">development</span>?</p><p> 题目写作思路分析</p><p> 大纲：逻辑心图，四段定位，18句装配。</p><p> 起--好现象，因为对年轻人来说，既是心态正常又是反应社会发展，与道德考虑无关。</p><p> 承--理由例子细节。年轻人崇拜明星是极其正常的心里历程，无关道德榜样。</p><p> 转--理由例子细节。年轻人崇拜明星是反应媒体社会的影响，无关道德榜样。</p><p> 合--整体而言是好现象，到底青年人免不了崇拜明星，所以道德的联想应该摆在一边。</p><p> 范文</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="overly">overly</span> <span word="preoccupied">preoccupied</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fantasy">fantasy</span> <span word="images">images</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="stars">stars</span> <span word="standing">standing</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="screen">screen</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stage">stage</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="field">field</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="celebrity">celebrity</span> <span word="worship">worship</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="everyday">everyday</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="particularly">particularly</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="adolescents">adolescents</span>. <span word="That">That</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="admiring">admiring</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="celebrities">celebrities</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="socially">socially</span> <span word="normal">normal</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="behavioral">behavioral</span> <span word="context">context</span>. <span word="Accepting">Accepting</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="young">young</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="inevitable">inevitable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="obsessed">obsessed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="personalities">personalities</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span> <span word="examples">examples</span>.</p><p> <span word="Psychologically">Psychologically</span> <span word="speaking">speaking</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="star">star</span> <span word="admiration">admiration</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="normal">normal</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="young">young</span>, <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="favorite">favorite</span> <span word="stars">stars</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="escapism">escapism</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="dull">dull</span> <span word="emotional">emotional</span> <span word="pain">pain</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="stress">stress</span>; <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="emulating">emulating</span> <span word="celebrities">celebrities</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="identify">identify</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="icons">icons</span>. <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="adulthood">adulthood</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="rank">rank</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="model">model</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="global">global</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="culture">culture</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lifestyle">lifestyle</span> <span word="promoted">promoted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="stars">stars</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="unattainable">unattainable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="person">person</span>, <span word="regardless">regardless</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="realistic">realistic</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span>. <span word="Hence">Hence</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="models">models</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="renowned">renowned</span> <span word="excellence">excellence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="field">field</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="scandals">scandals</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="happen">happen</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span>. <span word="That">That</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="admire">admire</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="shining">shining</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="successes">successes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="happen">happen</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="shadow">shadow</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>.</p>
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