雅思写作常见错误的修正方法
<p> 雅思写作中常见错误：<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="abroad">abroad</span>.</p><p> 严重程度：</p><p> 搞笑指数：</p><p> 这个错误在广大雅思考生的习作中是极为普遍常见的，从中文直译考量没有任何问题：有许多学生出国留学，有这个莫名奇妙的字在中章里常被当做一种语气助词使用，习惯进行汉英翻译的考生们便因此犯了名为<span word="run">run</span> - <span word="on">on</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span>这样一个错误。<span word="A">A</span> <span word="run">run</span>-<span word="on">on</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="asentence">asentence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="independent">independent</span> <span word="clauses">clauses</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="joined">joined</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span> <span word="punctuation">punctuation</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="conjunction">conjunction</span>.。上面的例子让我们不禁想起韩乔生名嘴那句有名的解说：<span word="XXX">XXX</span>以迅雷不及掩耳盗铃之势，令人忍俊不禁。</p><p> 探究这一错误的原因，名师分析认为主要还是考生对英文写作的句式分割概念不清，中文句子分割常常是从意义出发，只要意思没有表达完毕，可以一句连一句地持续写下去，直至内容结束。而英文句子是按照结构划分的，只要句子含有完整的主谓结构就可以独立成句。如果忽视中英文写作表达的区别，就会出现 一逗到底的断句方式，这是很多雅思考生的顽症和恶疾。例子中的错误就在于将两个单句<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="students">students</span>. 和<span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="abroad">abroad</span>.想当然地混合在了一起。</p><p> 那么我们先来看看这样的错误应该怎样来修正?</p><p> 修正方法一：将句子分割成两个独立的简单句：<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="students">students</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="abroad">abroad</span>.这种方法虽然没有任何语法错误，但连贯性不强而且过于简单，比较适合于写作初学者，在雅思写作中不予推荐。因此我们可以将其进行进一步的改良：1)增加连接词，根据本句的含义，可以增加表顺接的连词<span word="and">and</span>：<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="abroad">abroad</span>. 2)用分号分隔句子：<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="students">students</span>; <span word="they">they</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="abroad">abroad</span>.</p>
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