雅思写作8分技巧：多用名词
<p> 在中国考生的雅思写作中，动词和形容词是主角，但是实际上，在真正的英语写作中，名词才是占据主导地位的词，这就是东西方的语言习惯的不同。想要拿到雅思8分以上就要对这个问题多加注意啦。</p><p> 不要对动词、形容词过分依赖，要多用名词结构。</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="sedentary">sedentary</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="isolated">isolated</span> <span word="lifestyle">lifestyle</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span>.</p><p> 改：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="sedentary">sedentary</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="isolated">isolated</span> <span word="lifestyle">lifestyle</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="popularity">popularity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="acceptance">acceptance</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span>.</p><p> <span word="conclude">conclude</span> <span word="that">that</span><span word="draw">draw</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="place">place</span><span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="place">place</span></p><p> <span word="investin">investin</span><span word="devote">devote</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="investment">investment</span> <span word="to">to</span></p><p> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="popular">popular</span><span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="popularity">popularity</span></p><p> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="humorous">humorous</span><span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humor">humor</span></p><p> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="important">important</span><span word="be">be</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="importance">importance</span></p><p> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="valuable">valuable</span><span word="be">be</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="value">value</span></p><p> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="useful">useful</span><span word="be">be</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="use">use</span></p><p> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="helpful">helpful</span><span word="be">be</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="help">help</span></p><p> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span><span word="be">be</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span></p><p> 不要总是用有生命的名词或人称代词做主语：</p><p> ⑴ <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="camera">camera</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residential">residential</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="security">security</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="dwellers">dwellers</span>.</p><p> 改：<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="camera">camera</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residential">residential</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="approaches">approaches</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="security">security</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> 。</p>
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