关于修饰语的问题
<p>&<span word="nbsp">nbsp</span>;</p><p> 关于修饰语用法，未免要牵涉到修饰语的位置。这点相当重要，因为修饰语不管是单字的或短语的或甚至是分句的，它们都要定位，不可越雷池一步，否则不是语意模糊，就是不合句法。</p><p> 下面这则室内设计商的广告，有两个小缺点。一个是同义词重复;另一个便是修饰语位置不妥：</p><p> &<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="We">We</span> <span word="fabricate">fabricate</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="refinement">refinement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="finishing">finishing</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lowest">lowest</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="prices">prices</span>. </p><p> 先谈同义词的重复。在&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="while">while</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lowest">lowest</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="prices">prices</span>中，把&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="prices">prices</span>改为&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="level">level</span>即可。如果要品味好些，可把&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="possible">possible</span>挪到&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="level">level</span>后头，即：&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>; <span word="While">While</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lowest">lowest</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>.</p><p> 现在谈修饰语位置问题。</p><p> 在&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="We">We</span> <span word="fabricate">fabricate</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="available">available</span>中，形容词短语&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="best">best</span> <span word="quality">quality</span>漏了介语 &<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="of">of</span>：&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="of">of</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="quality">quality</span>。这样的短语一定要摆在被修饰的名词后面，即：&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="We">We</span> <span word="fabricate">fabricate</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="available">available</span>;不然，就把&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="quality">quality</span>去掉，只留住&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="best">best</span>也可：&<span word="ldquo">ldquo</span>;<span word="We">We</span>... <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="available">available</span>.</p><p> 上述这两种小毛病虽然不是很普遍，但是也会碰到。看看这几个实例就知道了：</p>
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