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<p>问题：求助帮忙看看小作文剑桥7text1的第一次写请专业人士给个分数和建议修改等跪谢·~Fromthetablebelowwecangettheinformationthatpercentageofnationalconsumerexpenditureisquitedifferent.Studingthisdat<p>答案：↓↓↓<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">江明辉的回答：<div class="content-b">网友采纳 第一段的第一句话要修改：Fromthetablebelowwecangettheinformationthatdifferentcountryhasdifferentpercentageofnationalconsumerexpenditure. 第二段的第一句话要改：First,asweseenconsumersofIrelandandTurkeyspendmostoftheirmoneyonfood、drinksortobacco.第二句把第二句中people前的the去掉.
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