20分求批改作文..本人比较菜;;不会语法..然后请您去我另一个拿分.顺便告诉下这个能得到多少分.题目Somepeoplefeelthatentertainersarepaidtoomuchmoney.DoyouagreeordisagreeTheissueofmakesalarieshasbe
<p>问题：20分求批改作文..本人比较菜;;不会语法..然后请您去我另一个拿分.顺便告诉下这个能得到多少分.题目Somepeoplefeelthatentertainersarepaidtoomuchmoney.DoyouagreeordisagreeTheissueofmakesalarieshasbe<p>答案：↓↓↓<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">蒋胜龙的回答：<div class="content-b">网友采纳 题目Somepeoplefeelthatentertainersarepaidtoomuchmoney. Doyouagreeordisagree Theissueofmakesalarieshasbeenanon-goingdebateforquitesometimeinthecontemporaryworldamongofficeworkers.Meanwhile,whetherthehigh-paidshouldbegainedbyentertainmentbusinesshasarousedheateddiscussion.Entertainers'emolument,asIseeit,couldneverbeadministeredtoomuch. However,amongalltheconvincingreasons,theonewhichshouldbestressedisthatmanyordinarypeoplewhoworkinthemedicaldomain,educationdomainandresearchdomainservicestothesocietyhavebeenimmense,buttheyacquirelessmoneythanentertainers.EvensomestarsattainalargeamountofpaymenthasexceedNobelprize,thisisinequitable. Furthermore,convincingargumentcanbemadethatitappearsaseaofindividualsprobablygiveupschoolstudyandpursuetoobtainamassofwagemucheasierliketheentertainmentstars.Althoughthereareagooddealofordinaryprofessionhaveastalentswhorequirespecialskillsasthosestarsandpossessyearsofedcationandspecialtraining,theresuitisofteninequitable.Thefull-timestudentsaredoubtfulofacceptedeffectofaestheticeducationwhentheydiscoveredthecircs,thisisbadtoculturenewcomers. Unfortunately,peoplearebecloudedasaresultoftheyonlyseeingstarsoffunwonalotofmoneywhenasdeletedtheybroughtpleasures,makethemhaveahundred-percentrestandawell-likinglifestylefromownmemory.Forexample,theolympicchampionLiuxiangwonhis6thNationalTitleatthe2006NationalAthleticschampionship,quiteanexcitingmatch. Inconclusion,IthinktheremaybesomeresonswhyentertainmentstarsearnhighsalariesbutoverallIagreethattheyareoverpaid.Governmentshouldimposeheavytaxesandputtingthemoneygiventopeoplewhodeservertheearning.Inthisway,Ibelievethatthosetalentswhomakingastupendouscontributiontosocietywillgettingaphychologicalbalanceandmoredevotionhiswork,canreducedthenegativeinfluencealso.应该打10分有些地方还需修改
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