Onepersonisstillaperson.buttwopeopleareateam.Ateamcandoeverythingthatseemsimpossible.Tosucceedinlife.Wemustiearnthespiritofcooperation.Firstofall.Wecancatchhappiness,relatiansandfriendshipifwepulltoge
<p>问题：Onepersonisstillaperson.buttwopeopleareateam.Ateamcandoeverythingthatseemsimpossible.Tosucceedinlife.Wemustiearnthespiritofcooperation.Firstofall.Wecancatchhappiness,relatiansandfriendshipifwepulltogether.Co<p>答案：↓↓↓<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">康涛的回答：<div class="content-b">网友采纳 第一句我觉得最好改为：Onepersonisonlyanindividual,buttwomakeateam. Firstofall这句：relatians应为relations.同时我觉得catch改为get或obtain之类好些. thepoweroflotspeople应改为：thepoweroflotsofpeople,如觉得拗口可改为thepowerofmanypeople Thild打错了应为Third. Aswecanseethetheabove改为：Aswecanseefromabove. hownecesserytobecooperation!改为：Hownecessaryitistocooperate(或tobecooperative)! 最后的两句断句没断好.But前面有个句号.fortheothers后面应该有个句号或逗号. 写得不错啊
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