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帮忙改一篇英语作文我英语很烂,请大家帮忙指出语法错误、用词不当之处,最好能讲一讲怎么改比较好Itisveryluckyformetopassthetest.ButIamstillhappythatIpassedit.NowIhavemoretimedoingsomething

<p>问题:帮忙改一篇英语作文我英语很烂,请大家帮忙指出语法错误、用词不当之处,最好能讲一讲怎么改比较好Itisveryluckyformetopassthetest.ButIamstillhappythatIpassedit.NowIhavemoretimedoingsomething
<p>答案:↓↓↓<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">陈浩勋的回答:<div class="content-b">网友采纳  .NowIhavemoretimedoingsomethingIlovetodo.应改为.NowIhavemoretimetodosomethingIlove.beforeSeptermber应该为bySeptermber其实encouraged也可以不过改成hortative更好Ihardlyevertalk...<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">康庭晓的回答:<div class="content-b">网友采纳  请问怎么用美句,如何收集美句呢》<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">陈浩勋的回答:<div class="content-b">网友采纳  我以前有同学看到一句收集一句记下来过几天背一遍过几天背一遍其实我觉得不如百度一下这种句子在精不在多要看到有用的多背一定要用在作文里用个几次就Practicemakesperfect了  附件里是我以前背的希望对你有用
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