meili 发表于 2022-10-18 21:54:00

我写的诗《甲秀楼》

<p>这是我在爸爸妈妈带我游玩贵阳甲秀楼的时候写的。那时候,一看到那个雄伟的楼,就突然随口念了出来。这时候,可是给爸爸妈妈大吃一惊,外公外婆也说简直我是“天才”。我很得意了呢。爸爸说,赶紧用笔记下来。否则过后忘掉了。</p><p><span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wrote">wrote</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="Jiaxiu">Jiaxiu</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Guiyang">Guiyang</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="magnificent">magnificent</span> <span word="building">building</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="suddenly">suddenly</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="out">out</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="shocked">shocked</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="grandparents">grandparents</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="genius">genius</span>. <span word="I">I</span>'<span word="m">m</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="proud">proud</span>. <span word="Dad">Dad</span> <span word="said">said</span>, <span word="take">take</span> <span word="notes">notes</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span>. <span word="Otherwise">Otherwise</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="forget">forget</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="later">later</span>.</p><p>现在我在网上贴出来,让大家评判评判。</p><p><span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="post">post</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="judge">judge</span>.</p><p>甲秀楼</p><p><span word="Jiaxiu">Jiaxiu</span> <span word="Pavilion">Pavilion</span></p><p>头顶蓝天云脚踩大地裙风吹不会动周围四条龙</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="sky">sky</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="head">head</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="clouds">clouds</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="feet">feet</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="earth">earth</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wind">wind</span> <span word="can">can</span>'<span word="t">t</span> <span word="move">move</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="dragons">dragons</span> <span word="around">around</span></p>
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