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<p>这篇作文条理清晰，语句通顺，值得推荐，尤其是连词的运用。</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="coherent">coherent</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="worth">worth</span> <span word="recommending">recommending</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="conjunctions">conjunctions</span>.</p><p><span word="Sustainable">Sustainable</span> <span word="Development">Development</span></p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sustainable">sustainable</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>。 <span word="How">How</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="sustainable">sustainable</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="facing">facing</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="planet">planet</span>。</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sustainable">sustainable</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>。<span word="How">How</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="sustainable">sustainable</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="facing">facing</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="planet">planet</span>。</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="situation">situation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="worrying">worrying</span>。 <span word="First">First</span>，<span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="before">before</span>。 <span word="Second">Second</span>，<span word="as">as</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="protection">protection</span>，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="remain">remain</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="degree">degree</span>。 <span word="The">The</span> <span word="gap">gap</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tendency">tendency</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="wider">wider</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wider">wider</span>。</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="situation">situation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="worrying">worrying</span>。<span word="First">First</span>，<span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="before">before</span>。<span word="Second">Second</span>，<span word="as">as</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="protection">protection</span>，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="remain">remain</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="degree">degree</span>。<span word="The">The</span> <span word="gap">gap</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tendency">tendency</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="wider">wider</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wider">wider</span>。</p><p><span word="To">To</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="joy">joy</span>，<span word="many">many</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="action">action</span>。 <span word="On">On</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>，<span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="laws">laws</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="amounts">amounts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="protection">protection</span>。 <span word="One">One</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>，<span word="popularized">popularized</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="cooperation">cooperation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="carried">carried</span> <span word="out">out</span>。</p>
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