试题评析
<p>今年全国卷Ⅱ的作文题受褒贬的程度似乎不如前几年，赞叹声也不如其他几个省市的多。褒贬不多，说明试题相对平稳；骂声不多，也许就可以说，这是一道出得比较好的题。此题扣合了时代主旋律：倡导社会主义荣辱观，构建文明社会、和谐社会。题目的特殊性在于，它直面了社会上存在忘恩负义的人这样一种实际状况，并不刻意回避现实生活中人性丑陋的一面。</p><p><span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="year">year</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="Volume">Volume</span> <span word="II">II</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="praise">praise</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="criticism">criticism</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="praise">praise</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="provinces">provinces</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="praise">praise</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="criticism">criticism</span>, <span word="indicating">indicating</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="questions">questions</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="stable">stable</span>; <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="swearing">swearing</span> <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="question">question</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="fits">fits</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="theme">theme</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="times">times</span>: <span word="advocating">advocating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="concept">concept</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="socialist">socialist</span> <span word="honor">honor</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="disgrace">disgrace</span>, <span word="building">building</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="civilized">civilized</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="harmonious">harmonious</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="particularity">particularity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="lies">lies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="faces">faces</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="actual">actual</span> <span word="situation">situation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ungrateful">ungrateful</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="deliberately">deliberately</span> <span word="avoid">avoid</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ugly">ugly</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="nature">nature</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p>试题完全具有“新材料作文”的命题特征。材料本身不算复杂，两个事例进行对比：前一个是丛飞无私捐助与受助者不知回报，后一个是学生小李“爱出者爱反，福往者福来”。从审题上说，并没有多大障碍，考生根据材料中的“记住别人对自己的帮助，学会帮助别人”，很容易想到“学会感恩与回报”“和谐互助”“爱心传递”等。命题要求“选择一个角度构思作文，自主确定立意，确定文体，确定标题”，这样，可供考生选择的侧面、角度就很多。比如，如果我们从歌手丛飞“不要责怪他们，我已不再需要医疗了”的话语立意，就可赞扬一种只知付出、不求回报的可贵精神和宽以待人、以德报怨的开阔胸襟；从“有一个受助者居然还埋怨说，这让他很没面子”的角度立意，还可批评一种狭隘的“面子”观；从“一个四年级女生捐了10元钱”的角度立意，还可强调帮助别人不在于你付出了多少，尽我所能就值得颂扬……当然，要想写出精彩的文章，除审题准确、思想健康外，还应力求感情真挚、认识深刻、情理并重。就“认识深刻”来说，你可以着重剖析“感恩之心沦丧”的深层原因，可以审视慈善事业在中国难以“火暴”的根源所在，等等。</p>
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