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<p>核心提示</p><p><span word="Core">Core</span> <span word="tips">tips</span></p><p>2005年有12篇文章从25万多份作文卷中脱颖而出，成为优卷。所谓优卷作文，指的是至少要在68分以上(满分70分)的作文。据评卷老师介绍，优卷作文是这样产生的，每一份作文卷至少要经过两个评卷老师之手，如果两个老师的评分差距在7分内，那么取平均分为最后成绩，否则再让第三个老师来评分，后取相近的两个分数(差距也必须在7分内)的平均分。最后的平均分如果在68分以上的，就要提交到作文评卷大组进行最后审定，大组的老师由福建师大的教授以及高考作文命题组老师组成。 福建地区高考作文题：两幅图：一幅是标准的圆形，周长小，面积大，比较稳定。一幅是带有棱角的圆形，周长大，面积小，比较多变。根据这两幅图自拟题目的话题作文。</p><p><span word="In">In</span> 2005, 12 <span word="articles">articles</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> 250000 <span word="Composition">Composition</span> <span word="Papers">Papers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="ones">ones</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="so">so</span>-<span word="called">called</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="refers">refers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 68 (<span word="full">full</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="of">of</span> 70). <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="introduction">introduction</span>, <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="produced">produced</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span>. <span word="Each">Each</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="paper">paper</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hands">hands</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="difference">difference</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="within">within</span> 7 <span word="points">points</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="score">score</span>, <span word="otherwise">otherwise</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="third">third</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="score">score</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> (<span word="the">the</span> <span word="difference">difference</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="within">within</span> 7 <span word="points">points</span>) <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="taken">taken</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> 68, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="submitted">submitted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="assessment">assessment</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="examination">examination</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="composed">composed</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="professors">professors</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Fujian">Fujian</span> <span word="Normal">Normal</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="proposition">proposition</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="entrance">entrance</span> <span word="examination">examination</span>. <span word="Two">Two</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span>: <span word="one">one</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="standard">standard</span> <span word="circle">circle</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="circumference">circumference</span>, <span word="large">large</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="stable">stable</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="circle">circle</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="edges">edges</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="corners">corners</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="grows">grows</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="circumference">circumference</span>, <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="changeable">changeable</span>. <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span>.</p>
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