平淡其外 绚烂其内
<p>上海高考作文命题一向有引领全国的美誉。</p><p><span word="Shanghai">Shanghai</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="entrance">entrance</span> <span word="examination">examination</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="proposition">proposition</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="leading">leading</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="reputation">reputation</span>.</p><p>今年，上海卷忽然一个美丽的翻腾，回到纯然淡然的命题作文上，回到似乎小学生都可以写的题目上：我想握住你的手。然而，平淡其外，绚烂其内。“想”、“握手”、“你”三个主词，便是绚烂的机巧与洞天所在。</p><p><span word="This">This</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="Shanghai">Shanghai</span> <span word="volume">volume</span> <span word="suddenly">suddenly</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="toss">toss</span>, <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pure">pure</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="indifferent">indifferent</span> <span word="proposition">proposition</span> <span word="composition">composition</span>, <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="students">students</span>: <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="plain">plain</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="gorgeous">gorgeous</span> <span word="inside">inside</span>. "<span word="Think">Think</span>", "<span word="shake">shake</span> <span word="hands">hands</span>" <span word="and">and</span> "<span word="you">you</span>" <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="words">words</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="gorgeous">gorgeous</span> <span word="ingenuity">ingenuity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cave">cave</span>.</p><p>“想”是题挈。“想”既决定了由想生发的文章纲目，也设定了文章的重心不在如何“握手”和“握手”结果，而在“握手”动机的由来。这个由来或隐含着刻骨铭心的故事，或交织着难以言表的愧疚、感激，或蕴藏着与时俱进的启迪、感悟。“想”作为认知、思想、情志生发的意念载体，暗示了有一番心路要叙，有一根情弦要拨，有一方智窗要开。“想”是命题的机巧所在，也是本文情蕴和个性所在。淡化“想”，甚至丢弃“想”，直接演绎“握住你的手”如何如何，难免偏失。</p>
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