8年湖北部分高考满分作文赏析
<p>作文一：举手投足间</p><p><span word="Composition">Composition</span> 1: <span word="between">between</span> <span word="hands">hands</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="feet">feet</span></p><p>外公弥留之际，外婆整夜地陪他低声聊天，或者看着他，仿佛时间也静止了。</p><p><span word="When">When</span> <span word="Grandpa">Grandpa</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="dying">dying</span>, <span word="grandma">grandma</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="chat">chat</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="low">low</span> <span word="voice">voice</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="night">night</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="still">still</span>.</p><p>小时候，我爱去外公家。外公知道好多趣事，外婆的厨艺精湛。每每听外公眉飞色舞地讲完一段，爷孙俩都饿了。于是外公蹑手蹑脚钻进厨房，趁外婆没在，夹几片刚炸好的鸡排，赶忙回来和我分享，像一个小孩子。有几次外公被外婆“人赃并获”，只得被外婆打手。然后我们乖乖地摆好桌子准备开饭，那个时候，真开心。</p><p><span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kid">kid</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="loved">loved</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="grandfather">grandfather</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="house">house</span>. <span word="Grandpa">Grandpa</span> <span word="knows">knows</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="interesting">interesting</span> <span word="things">things</span>. <span word="Grandma">Grandma</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="cooking">cooking</span>. <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hear">hear</span> <span word="grandpa">grandpa</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="speech">speech</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="hungry">hungry</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="Grandpa">Grandpa</span> <span word="crept">crept</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kitchen">kitchen</span>, <span word="took">took</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="freshly">freshly</span> <span word="fried">fried</span> <span word="chicken">chicken</span> <span word="chops">chops</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="grandma">grandma</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="there">there</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hurried">hurried</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span>. <span word="Several">Several</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="grandpa">grandpa</span> <span word="was">was</span> "<span word="stolen">stolen</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="captured">captured</span>" <span word="by">by</span> <span word="grandma">grandma</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="beaten">beaten</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="grandma">grandma</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="table">table</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="dinner">dinner</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>.</p><p>有时外婆买菜，用了很长时间。外公就急得坐不住了，在窗边不住张望，希望看到外婆的身影。可是当得知外婆是为了买我们爱吃的正宗牛肉，走远路时，外公又喜笑颜开起来。</p>
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