《灯光》梗概
<p>清明节前的一个晚上，我慢步在华灯璀璨的天安门广场上，忽然听见后面传来一声赞叹：“多好啊”。不尽回忆起一件往事：那是1947年秋，郝副营长带领突击连去打前锋，而天空黑暗，后续部队看不到突破口，郝副营长在危机之中点亮了一本书，照亮了突破口，火光暴露了他自己，他被机枪打中，这位年轻的战士壮烈的牺牲了。他，一个伟大的战士，为了让孩子们在电灯下学习，而他自己却没来的及见一见电灯。</p><p><span word="One">One</span> <span word="night">night</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Qingming">Qingming</span> <span word="Festival">Festival</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="walking">walking</span> <span word="slowly">slowly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bright">bright</span> <span word="Tian">Tian</span>'<span word="anmen">anmen</span> <span word="Square">Square</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="heard">heard</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="exclamation">exclamation</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="behind">behind</span>: "<span word="how">how</span> <span word="nice">nice</span>.". <span word="It">It</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="autumn">autumn</span> <span word="of">of</span> 1947 <span word="that">that</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="battalion">battalion</span> <span word="commander">commander</span> <span word="Hao">Hao</span> <span word="led">led</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assault">assault</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fight">fight</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="front">front</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="sky">sky</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="dark">dark</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="subsequent">subsequent</span> <span word="troops">troops</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="breach">breach</span>. <span word="Vice">Vice</span> <span word="battalion">battalion</span> <span word="commander">commander</span> <span word="Hao">Hao</span> <span word="lit">lit</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="book">book</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="crisis">crisis</span>, <span word="illuminating">illuminating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="breach">breach</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="fire">fire</span> <span word="exposed">exposed</span> <span word="himself">himself</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="shot">shot</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="machine">machine</span> <span word="gun">gun</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="soldier">soldier</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="heroic">heroic</span> <span word="sacrifice">sacrifice</span>. <span word="He">He</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="fighter">fighter</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="electric">electric</span> <span word="light">light</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="electric">electric</span> <span word="light">light</span>.</p><p>点评：</p><p><span word="Comment">Comment</span>:</p><p>把故事的主要内容都介绍清楚了。符合写梗概的要求。</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="content">content</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="introduced">introduced</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span>. <span word="Meet">Meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sketch">sketch</span>.</p>
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