张培基英译散文赏析之《雾》
<p>《雾》</p><p><span word="Fog">Fog</span></p><p>茅盾</p><p><span word="Mao">Mao</span> <span word="Dun">Dun</span></p><p>| 译文摘自张培基《英译中国散文选二》</p><p>雾遮没了正对着后窗的一带山峰。</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="mountain">mountain</span> <span word="peaks">peaks</span> <span word="directly">directly</span> <span word="facing">facing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="window">window</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="room">room</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="veiled">veiled</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fog">fog</span>.</p><p>要点：</p><p>1， 本句采用被动语态，突出施动者，也给人一种画面感~</p><p>2， 将“雾”译为<span word="fog">fog</span>，而非<span word="mist">mist</span>，因为后者指的是“薄雾”，<span word="fog">fog</span> 指“雾，雾气”，<span word="smog">smog</span>指“烟雾”，<span word="haze">haze</span>则是指“雾霾”</p><p>综述：“雾”的表达有好多种，要选择最适合的一种~</p><p>我还不知道这些山峰叫什么名儿。我来此的第一夜就看见那最高的一座山的顶巅像钻石装成的宝冕似的灯火。那时我的房里还没有电灯，每晚上在暗中默坐，凝望这半空的一片光明，使我记起了儿时所读的童话。实在的呢，这排列得很整齐的依稀分为三层的火球，衬着黑魆魆的山峰的背景，无论如何，是会引起非人间的缥缈的思想的。</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="names">names</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="mountain">mountain</span> <span word="peaks">peaks</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="unknown">unknown</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="night">night</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="top">top</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highest">highest</span> <span word="mountain">mountain</span> <span word="shining">shining</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="lights">lights</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="precious">precious</span> <span word="crown">crown</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="diamond">diamond</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="electric">electric</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="room">room</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evening">evening</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="sit">sit</span> <span word="quietly">quietly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="dark">dark</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fix">fix</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="eyes">eyes</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="midair">midair</span> <span word="radiance">radiance</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="reminded">reminded</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fairy">fairy</span> <span word="tales">tales</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="childhood">childhood</span>. <span word="Indeed">Indeed</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="orderly">orderly</span> <span word="array">array</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="lights">lights</span> <span word="shining">shining</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="indistinct">indistinct</span> <span word="tiers">tiers</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="dark">dark</span> <span word="mountain">mountain</span> <span word="peaks">peaks</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="conjure">conjure</span> <span word="up">up</span>, <span word="without">without</span> <span word="fail">fail</span>, <span word="visions">visions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ethereal">ethereal</span>.</p>
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