meili 发表于 2022-10-18 21:13:42

Especially的一般译法

<p>在科技英语中常常见到在一个完整的句子后,由<span word="especially">especially</span>2、应该指出,任何形式的预热都会增加焊工的困难和使他们身感不适,特别是在容器内高温预热下施焊时。</p><p>3、应该指出,任何形式的预热都会增加焊工的困难和使他们身感不适,在容器内高温预热下施焊时尤其如此。 比较这三种译文,译文1的缺点在于:原文的叙述方式是从一般到特殊,译文则超越一般情况,直接谈到特殊情况,与原文似有不符。译文2末尾的时间状语悬空,在语法上似无说明对象,读来令人有言有未尽之感。译文3表义正确,句子结构与原文一致,句尾用“如此”二字呼应前文,无句意残缺和语气停滞之感。译文3无疑是较好的,且这一汉译模式似可用于处理类似结构的所有英语句子。下面再举几个例子: 1)<span word="The">The</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="repair">repair</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="easy">easy</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="borderline">borderline</span> <span word="cases">cases</span>.</p><p>作出返修的决定不是容易的,在可修可不修的情况下尤其如此。</p><p>2)<span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="code">code</span> <span word="vessels">vessels</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="fabricated">fabricated</span> <span word="party">party</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shop">shop</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="partly">partly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="field">field</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="boilers">boilers</span>.</p><p>许多规范容器的制造,部分是在工厂,部分是在现场进行的,锅炉尤其如此。</p><p>3)<span word="A">A</span> <span word="visual">visual</span> <span word="inspection">inspection</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="done">done</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="materials">materials</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fabrication">fabrication</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="vessels">vessels</span>.</p><p>必须对材料仔细进行外观检查,对制造压力容器所用材料尤需如此。</p>
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