2017届高考英语书面表达练讲指导评析（第三部分）考场习作评析（三）
<p> 2017届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第三部分考场习作评析）（三）</p><p> 请根据下列两幅图写一篇短文对此漫画的感受和观点写作时要适当地发挥，语言连贯；</p><p> 词数：150左右。</p><p> (7)<span word="From">From</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span>. (8)<span word="As">As</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="know">know</span>, <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="children">children</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span>. (9)<span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="health">health</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="minds">minds</span>. (10)<span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="it">it</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span>.</p><p> 【习作评析】</p><p> 在评析考生考场习作之前，先让我们来看一看该书面表达的最基本的要点是什么。</p><p> 以上要点必须在书面表达中有所表述，缺一不可。</p><p> 【习作的亮点】</p><p> 全文共10句3.习作<span word="Education">Education</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hot">hot</span> <span word="topic">topic</span>, <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="today">today</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="world">world</span> .<span word="But">But</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="parent">parent</span> <span word="knows">knows</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="educate">educate</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="correctly">correctly</span>.）的概括非常精炼，恰到好处。</p><p> 4.<span word="But">But</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="parent">parent</span> <span word="knows">knows</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="educate">educate</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="correctly">correctly</span>.这一句的使用说明作者对全部否定和部分否定句掌握得很好；</p><p> 5.习作在谈谈对漫画中母亲的做法看法<span word="hey">hey</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="it">it</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span>. ”将主题进行了升华，给阅卷老师留下了深刻印象。</p>
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