2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分 写作提升系列第二板块 第14节(北师大版)
<p> 第十四节 建议信 1．结构分析 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。 主体段落：通常首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。 尾段：对提出的建议进行总结。 2．时态的使用：以一般现在时为主，同时兼顾其他时态。 佳句递送 [好开头] 1．<span word="I">I</span>’<span word="m">m</span> <span word="glad">glad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="receive">receive</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="asking">asking</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="suggestions">suggestions</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="well">well</span>. 很高兴收到你的来信，询问我如何很好地欣赏艺术。 2．<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="glad">glad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enter">enter</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="suggestions">suggestions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="choosing">choosing</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="major">major</span>. 我很高兴得知你将进入大学并且很荣幸能就专业选择方面给你提一些建议。 3．<span word="Concerning">Concerning</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="request">request</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="advice">advice</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="fit">fit</span>. 对于你的请求，我想就如何保持健康提出我的建议。</p><p> [好结尾] 1．<span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>，<span word="you">you</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="wise">wise</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="advice">advice</span>. 依我之见，采纳他的建议是您的明智之举。 2．<span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="suggestion">suggestion</span>. 真心希望你能考虑我的建议。 3．<span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="proposals">proposals</span> <span word="useful">useful</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="ready">ready</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span>. 我希望这些建议对你有所帮助，并且乐于和你就此事进行进一步的交流。 [好句子] 1．<span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="balanced">balanced</span> <span word="diet">diet</span>. 首先，我会推荐均衡饮食。 2．<span word="Why">Why</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="drink">drink</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span>，<span word="exercise">exercise</span>，<span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="fruit">fruit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="vegetables">vegetables</span>? 为何不少喝点酒，参加锻炼，不抽烟，多吃水果和蔬菜呢？ 3．<span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="beneficial">beneficial</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="concerning">concerning</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="fatness">fatness</span>. 我觉得就你的肥胖问题表达我的观点可能会很有用。 4．闲暇之余，你可以有很多地方休闲娱乐。 ①<span word="In">In</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="spare">spare</span> <span word="time">time</span>，<span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="yourself">yourself</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="places">places</span>. ②<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="yourself">yourself</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="spare">spare</span> <span word="time">time</span>. ③<span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="yourself">yourself</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="spare">spare</span> <span word="time">time</span>. 佳作赏析 [题目要求] 你(王伟)的好友(李磊)最近经常和一些朋友去网吧、游戏厅玩，有时甚至旷课。请你根据下面要点给他写一封建议信。 1．朋友在人的一生中起着重要作用； 2．真正的朋友不会让你去做坏事； 3．所以我们要明辨是非，慎重交友。 [现场阅卷] 精彩变式 ①用非谓语动词短语作原因状语进行改写 ②用强调句型，强调句中加黑部分 ③强调句中谓语动词<span word="hope">hope</span></p>
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