2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分 写作提升系列第二板块 第12节(北师大版)
<p> 第十二节 记叙文 记叙文写作时注意以下几点： 1．内容完整，脉络清楚 写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展、一直到结束的整个过程，然后再搜集、选取素材。一般来说，记叙文包括六大要素，即“六何”——“何人于何时何地为何如何做何事”。写这类文章我们要从六个方面(<span word="when">when</span>，<span word="where">where</span>，<span word="who">who</span>，<span word="what">what</span>，<span word="why">why</span>，<span word="how">how</span>)入手，将题目所要求的全部要点交代清楚。记叙文的目的就是叙述一个经过，因此要有头有尾，自始至终，确保内容的完整。 2．中心突出，详略得当 在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。在写作过程中我们要突出重点，详细叙述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写、粗述那些非关键的次要情节。 3．语言灵活，准确生动 记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事、物描写得具体生动，可读性强。</p><p> [好开头] 1．<span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="forgot">forgot</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evening">evening</span> <span word="party">party</span>. 尽管那发生在三年前，我将永远忘不了那场晚会。 2．<span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="week">week</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="amusing">amusing</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. 上周，我们进行了一次有趣的活动。 佳句递送 [好结尾] 1．<span word="I">I</span> <span word="learnt">learnt</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="it">it</span>. 从中我学到了很多。 2．<span word="This">This</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unpleasant">unpleasant</span> <span word="trip">trip</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="had">had</span>! 这是我曾经有过的一次最不愉快的旅行。 [好句子] 1．由于大雨所有的航班都被取消了，乘客们不得不改乘火车。 ①<span word="All">All</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="flights">flights</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="cancelled">cancelled</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="rain">rain</span>，<span word="so">so</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="passengers">passengers</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="train">train</span>. ②<span word="All">All</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="flights">flights</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="cancelled">cancelled</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="rain">rain</span>；<span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>，<span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="passengers">passengers</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="train">train</span>. ③<span word="All">All</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="flights">flights</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="cancelled">cancelled</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="rain">rain</span>，<span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="passengers">passengers</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="train">train</span>.</p>
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