2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分 写作提升系列第一板块 能力层级（一）第7节(北师大版)
<p> 6．<span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="noise">noise</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="couldn">couldn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="studying">studying</span>. (使用<span word="with">with</span>复合结构) <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="noise">noise</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="on">on</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="couldn">couldn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="studying">studying</span>. 7．<span word="I">I</span> <span word="didn">didn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="advice">advice</span>，<span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="failed">failed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exam">exam</span>. (使用虚拟语气) <span word="If">If</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="advice">advice</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="wouldn">wouldn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="failed">failed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exam">exam</span>. 8．<span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="ill">ill</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="day">day</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="didn">didn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span>.(使用虚拟语气) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="ill">ill</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="day">day</span>，<span word="otherwise">otherwise</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span>. 9．<span word="They">They</span> <span word="carried">carried</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="among">among</span> 260 <span word="students">students</span>.(使用被动语态) <span word="A">A</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="carried">carried</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="among">among</span> 260 <span word="students">students</span>. 10．<span word="They">They</span> <span word="didn">didn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="protecting">protecting</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fish">fish</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="river">river</span> <span word="died">died</span> <span word="out">out</span>. ①<span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fish">fish</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="river">river</span> <span word="died">died</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="protecting">protecting</span>.(使用倒装句) ②<span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fish">fish</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="river">river</span> <span word="died">died</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="realized">realized</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="protecting">protecting</span>.(使用强调句) [演练提升] 请按以下内容要点写一篇短文，尽可能多地使用高级词汇和高级句式。 1．众所周知，世界人口在一天天增长，因此需要大量的新鲜用水。 2．随着工业的快速发展，产生了很多有毒的气体和废水，结果导致了水污染，尽管水是新的，但却不能再运用。 3．这时候人们才意识到水源的重要性，确实到了人们行动起来保护水源的时候了。不要再污染用水，否则，我们就不能再在这个地球上生存，那会是怎样的一种可怕的景象啊！ 4．只有充足的水源，世界才能蓬勃发展。 【参考范文】 <span word="As">As</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="all">all</span>，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="day">day</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="feed">feed</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="population">population</span>. <span word="What">What</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="more">more</span>，<span word="with">with</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="developing">developing</span> <span word="rapidly">rapidly</span>，<span word="poisonous">poisonous</span> <span word="gases">gases</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="waters">waters</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="produced">produced</span>，<span word="consequently">consequently</span> <span word="resulting">resulting</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="water">water</span>. <span word="Though">Though</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span>，<span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="used">used</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span> <span word="water">water</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="it">it</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="action">action</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="resource">resource</span>. <span word="Stop">Stop</span> <span word="polluting">polluting</span> <span word="water">water</span>，<span word="otherwise">otherwise</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="wouldn">wouldn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="terrible">terrible</span> <span word="scene">scene</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="faced">faced</span> <span word="with">with</span>! <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="prosperous">prosperous</span>. 第七节 高级词汇与高级句式 [技法指导] 写作时，“高级词汇与高级句式”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处，也会为你的作文增添色彩。 一、使用高级词汇的三大技巧 1．标新立异 写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩，别人有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异。 <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span>’<span word="m">m</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>，<span word="parents">parents</span>’ <span word="much">much</span> <span word="protection">protection</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="harm">harm</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="children">children</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="development">development</span>. →<span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span>’<span word="m">m</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>，<span word="parents">parents</span>’ <span word="limitless">limitless</span> <span word="protection">protection</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="harm">harm</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="children">children</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="development">development</span>.(2017·福建高考满分作文) <span word="With">With</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>，<span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="certainly">certainly</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="laundrywoman">laundrywoman</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="done">done</span>. →<span word="With">With</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>，<span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="certainly">certainly</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="laundrywoman">laundrywoman</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="done">done</span>.(2017·广东高考满分作文) 2．短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span>，<span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="gift">gift</span>，<span word="my">my</span> <span word="dad">dad</span> <span word="tried">tried</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="earn">earn</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span>. →<span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span>，<span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="gift">gift</span>，<span word="my">my</span> <span word="dad">dad</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="effort">effort</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="earn">earn</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span>.(2017·重庆高分满分作文) <span word="What">What</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="more">more</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="pour">pour</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="troubles">troubles</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="face">face</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="release">release</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span>. →<span word="What">What</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="more">more</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="pour">pour</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="troubles">troubles</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="faced">faced</span> <span word="with">with</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="release">release</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span>.(2017·重庆高考满分作文) 3．避免重复 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 <span word="I">I</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="likes">likes</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="football">football</span> <span word="matches">matches</span>. →<span word="I">I</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="enjoys">enjoys</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="football">football</span> <span word="matches">matches</span>. [学以致用] 用较高级词汇代替加黑的词或短语 1．<span word="We">We</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="chance">chance</span>.</p>
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