2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分 写作提升系列第一板块 能力层级（一）第4节(北师大版)
<p> [演练提升] Ⅰ.完成句子 1．曾经，我在学习英语中，尤其在词汇和语法方面面对着一个难题，依我看，它不可能被克服。 <span word="Once">Once</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="faced">faced</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="difficulty">difficulty</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="English">English</span>，<span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="vocabulary">vocabulary</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="grammar">grammar</span>，<span word="which">which</span>，<span word="from">from</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span>，<span word="is">is</span>_<span word="unlikely">unlikely</span>_<span word="to">to</span>_<span word="overcome">overcome</span>．</p><p> (2017·山东高考满分作文) 2．当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。 <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="done">done</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="single">single</span> <span word="children">children</span>，<span word="which">which</span>_<span word="makes">makes</span>_<span word="the">the</span>_<span word="children">children</span>_<span word="rely">rely</span>_<span word="on">on</span>_<span word="their">their</span>_<span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="badly">badly</span>.</p><p> (2017·福建高考满分作文) 3．你知道，中国结非常受中国人的喜欢。 <span word="As">As</span>_<span word="you">you</span>_<span word="know">know</span>，<span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="knots">knots</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="people">people</span>.</p><p> (2017·新课标全国卷Ⅱ满分作文) 4．从短文中，我们会了解到一个善良的洗衣女工，尽管工资低但她决定用节省下的钱捐助一所大学一笔钱，希望可帮助到那些财政有困难的学生。 <span word="From">From</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="passage">passage</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="laundry">laundry</span> <span word="woman">woman</span> <span word="who">who</span>_<span word="got">got</span>_<span word="paid">paid</span>_<span word="lowly">lowly</span> <span word="decided">decided</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="donate">donate</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="she">she</span>_<span word="had">had</span>_<span word="saved">saved</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="life">life</span>，<span word="hoping">hoping</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.</p><p> (2017·广东高考满分作文) 5．我经常想起被陌生人的言语伤害和侮辱的时候，甚至有时是来自熟悉的人。 <span word="I">I</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="when">when</span>_<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="felt">felt</span>_<span word="hurt">hurt</span> <span word="and">and</span>_<span word="insulted">insulted</span>_<span word="by">by</span>_<span word="rude">rude</span>_<span word="remarks">remarks</span>_<span word="from">from</span>_<span word="strangers">strangers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="acquaintances">acquaintances</span>. Ⅱ.请按以下内容要点写一篇有关你的同学<span word="Kate">Kate</span>的英语短文，尽可能多地使用定语从句。 1．我有一个同学叫<span word="Kate">Kate</span>，她的妈妈是我以前的英语老师。 2．<span word="Kate">Kate</span>是一个容易相处的人，我们都喜欢她。 3．<span word="Kate">Kate</span>在此次口语竞赛中获得第一名，这使得她妈妈很高兴。 4．新年就要到了，到时<span word="Kate">Kate</span>会和她妈妈一起去香港。 5．众所周知，香港是一个购物天堂，<span word="Kate">Kate</span>打算在那里买她需要的东西。 【参考范文】 <span word="I">I</span>_<span word="have">have</span>_<span word="a">a</span>_<span word="classmate">classmate</span>_<span word="called">called</span>_<span word="Kate">Kate</span>，<span word="whose">whose</span>_<span word="mother">mother</span>_<span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span>_<span word="former">former</span>_<span word="English">English</span>_<span word="teacher">teacher</span>._<span word="Kate">Kate</span>_<span word="is">is</span>_<span word="a">a</span>_<span word="girl">girl</span>_<span word="who">who</span>_<span word="is">is</span>_<span word="easy">easy</span>_<span word="to">to</span>_<span word="get">get</span>_<span word="along">along</span>_<span word="with">with</span>_<span word="and">and</span>_<span word="we">we</span>_<span word="all">all</span>_<span word="like">like</span>_<span word="her">her</span>._<span word="Kate">Kate</span>_<span word="took">took</span>_<span word="the">the</span>_<span word="first">first</span>_<span word="place">place</span>_<span word="in">in</span>_<span word="the">the</span>_<span word="Speech">Speech</span>_<span word="Contest">Contest</span>，<span word="which">which</span>_<span word="makes">makes</span>_<span word="her">her</span>_<span word="mother">mother</span>_<span word="happy">happy</span>._<span word="The">The</span>_<span word="New">New</span>_<span word="Year">Year</span>_<span word="is">is</span>_<span word="coming">coming</span>，<span word="when">when</span> <span word="Kate">Kate</span> <span word="will">will</span>_<span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span>_<span word="Hong">Hong</span>_<span word="Kong">Kong</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="mother">mother</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="know">know</span>，<span word="Hong">Hong</span>_<span word="Kong">Kong</span>_<span word="is">is</span>_<span word="a">a</span>_<span word="shopping">shopping</span>_<span word="paradise">paradise</span>，<span word="where">where</span>_<span word="Kate">Kate</span>_<span word="intends">intends</span>_<span word="to">to</span>_<span word="buy">buy</span>_<span word="what">what</span>_<span word="she">she</span>_<span word="needs">needs</span>. 第四节 定语从句的写作 [技法指导] 一、写作中常用的几种定语从句 1．关系代词引导的定语从句 关系代词<span word="who">who</span>，<span word="whom">whom</span>，<span word="whose">whose</span>，<span word="that">that</span>，<span word="which">which</span>，<span word="as">as</span>引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是<span word="which">which</span>和<span word="as">as</span>引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。 <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>，<span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="received">received</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="donation">donation</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="encouraged">encouraged</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="harder">harder</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="success">success</span>.</p>
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