【3年高考2年模拟】2016届高三英语一轮复习课件 写作指导三 句式变化
<p> 【范文】 <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="John">John</span>, <span word="How">How</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="going">going</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="know">know</span>,<span word="I">I</span>’<span word="m">m</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Senior">Senior</span> <span word="Three">Three</span> <span word="now">now</span>.<span word="A">A</span> <span word="selective">selective</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="held">held</span></p><p> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="week">week</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span>.<span word="Those">Those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="pass">pass</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="join">join</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="winter">winter</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span> <span word="camp">camp</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Oxford">Oxford</span> <span word="University">University</span>.<span word="It">It</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dream">dream</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="abroad">abroad</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="authentic">authentic</span> <span word="English">English</span>.<span word="And">And</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="winter">winter</span> <span word="camp">camp</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="officially">officially</span> <span word="organized">organized</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="British">British</span> <span word="Council">Council</span>.<span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="treasure">treasure</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enter">enter</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="test">test</span>.<span word="However">However</span>,<span word="my">my</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span>’<span word="m">m</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>,<span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="entrance">entrance</span> <span word="exam">exam</span>- <span word="ination">ination</span>,<span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="don">don</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="waste">waste</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="camp">camp</span>.<span word="Could">Could</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="advice">advice</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="valuable">valuable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="timely">timely</span> <span word="advice">advice</span>. <span word="I">I</span>’<span word="m">m</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Hua">Hua</span> 写作指导 栏目索引 写作指导 栏目索引 课标卷外研版 英语 写作指导三 句式变化 1 句式变化指导 很多考生的英语作文句式单一、呆板,语言缺乏多样性和灵活性,这 与高考作文要求考生的语言结构富于变化、错落有致差距甚远。要想 使语言富于变化,考生就要多练习英语句型的改写或转换,为写作打好句 型基础。 句式变化一:改变句子开头 许多考生在写作中倾向于用与人有关系的词,经常用名词和代词作 为句子的开头,如 <span word="People">People</span>,<span word="We">We</span>,<span word="I">I</span>,<span word="He">He</span>,<span word="They">They</span>,<span word="She">She</span>等。但这种开头见多了,难免 让人厌倦。试比较: 写作指导 <span word="A">A</span>.<span word="People">People</span> <span word="throughout">throughout</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span> <span word="demanded">demanded</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="nutri">nutri</span>- <span word="tious">tious</span> <span word="food">food</span>. <span word="B">B</span>.<span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="demand">demand</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="nutritious">nutritious</span> <span word="food">food</span>. 第二句用“<span word="there">there</span> <span word="be">be</span>句型”开头,这样既改变了“主语+谓语+宾语”的单 调句型,又把想强调的意思突显出来。实际上,为了把文章写得生动活泼, 除了用主语开头外,还可以用句子的其他成分开头。 1.用状语开头 <span word="Too">Too</span> <span word="often">often</span>,<span word="students">students</span> <span word="stray">stray</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="habit">habit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cheating">cheating</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="tests">tests</span>. <span word="Dark">Dark</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="empty">empty</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="house">house</span> <span word="looked">looked</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="remembered">remembered</span> <span word="it">it</span>. 2.用同位语开头 <span word="Air">Air</span>,<span word="water">water</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="oxygen">oxygen</span>,<span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="life">life</span>. 3.用表语开头 <span word="Equally">Equally</span> <span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highest">highest</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="intense">intense</span> <span word="in">in</span>- <span word="terest">terest</span> <span word="plus">plus</span> <span word="persistent">persistent</span> <span word="effort">effort</span>. 4.用宾语开头 <span word="My">My</span> <span word="advice">advice</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="listen">listen</span> <span word="to">to</span>;<span word="my">my</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="laughed">laughed</span> <span word="at">at</span>.<span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="for">for</span>. 5.以短语修饰语开头 (1)以介词短语开头 <span word="To">To</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="interesting">interesting</span>,<span word="but">but</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="wife">wife</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="boring">boring</span>. (2)以分词短语开头 <span word="Disturbed">Disturbed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="discord">discord</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="decades">decades</span>,<span word="John">John</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="flight">flight</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Pacific">Pacific</span> <span word="islands">islands</span>. (3)以不定式短语开头 <span word="To">To</span> <span word="pass">pass</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exam">exam</span>,<span word="you">you</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>. 句式变化二:巧用连词 有的考生在作文中过多地使用简单句,成了简单句堆砌;有的写复杂 句时,动辄就用<span word="so">so</span>,<span word="and">and</span>,<span word="then">then</span>,<span word="but">but</span>,<span word="or">or</span>,<span word="however">however</span>,<span word="yet">yet</span>等,这样非但达不到丰富表 达方式的目的,反而使句子结构松散、呆板。为了避免这种现象,可以通 过使用其他连词,尤其是一些表示从属关系的连词,如 <span word="that">that</span>,<span word="because">because</span>,<span word="since">since</span>, <span word="although">although</span>,<span word="after">after</span>,<span word="as">as</span>,<span word="before">before</span>,<span word="when">when</span>,<span word="whenever">whenever</span>,<span word="if">if</span>,<span word="unless">unless</span>,<span word="as">as</span> <span word="if">if</span>等,不仅能够丰富句 型,而且还能够把思想表达得更清楚,意义更连贯。如: <span word="Natural">Natural</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="limited">limited</span>.<span word="They">They</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="exhausted">exhausted</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="future">future</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="true">true</span>.<span word="But">But</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>.<span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="widely">widely</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>. 这段文字用几个简单句表达,它们之间内在的逻辑关系含糊不清,意思支 离破碎。如果使用连词,将简单句与其前后合并,形成主次关系,就把一个 比较复杂的内容和关系表达得层次清楚、结构严谨。如: <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="widely">widely</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="for">for</span></p>
页:
[1]