2017届高考英语（课标全国）一轮复习课件：写作提升 第3讲
<p> 或：(<span word="The">The</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="early">early</span>.) 或：(<span word="Before">Before</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="speak">speak</span> <span word="anything">anything</span>，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="end">end</span>.) 如此等等，不胜枚举。只要我们善于扩充，适度添加单词、短语或从句，句子就会更富有表现力。 3．着意添加成分，实现高级扩展 如果我们给一个简单句着意添加一些附加成分，句子的扩展性则会更强。 我们以“他上学来晚了”为中心句，便可尝试添加附加信息：他昨晚熬夜了；他没赶上车；他没耽误第一节课；不然他就赶上第一节课了。这样，我们便会有以下句子： <span word="He">He</span> <span word="stayed">stayed</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="night">night</span>，<span word="so">so</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="to">to</span></p><p> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="late">late</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="late">late</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="stayed">stayed</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="late">late</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="night">night</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="missed">missed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bus">bus</span>，<span word="so">so</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="late">late</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="missed">missed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bus">bus</span>，<span word="but">but</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="didn">didn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="miss">miss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="class">class</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="missed">missed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bus">bus</span>，<span word="or">or</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="wouldn">wouldn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="missed">missed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span></p><p> <span word="class">class</span>. 4．运用修辞手法，实现自由扩展 只要有几个句子罗列出现，句与句之间便有一定的关系。如果我们想表达承接、转折、因果、递进等关系，扩展句子时，就可以根据语义自由选择恰当的关联词。 用于不同功能的这类词汇有：</p><p> 并列：<span word="and">and</span>，<span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span>，<span word="also">also</span>，<span word="both">both</span>...<span word="and">and</span>，<span word="neither">neither</span>...<span word="nor">nor</span>...，<span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span>...<span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span>...等； 选择：<span word="or">or</span>，<span word="either">either</span>...<span word="or">or</span>，<span word="neither">neither</span>...<span word="nor">nor</span>，<span word="otherwise">otherwise</span>等； 原因：<span word="because">because</span>，<span word="for">for</span>，<span word="as">as</span>，<span word="since">since</span>，<span word="owing">owing</span> <span word="to">to</span>，<span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span>等； 结果：<span word="so">so</span>，<span word="therefore">therefore</span>，<span word="thus">thus</span>，<span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>等； 时间：<span word="when">when</span>，<span word="before">before</span>，<span word="later">later</span>，<span word="first">first</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span>，<span word="next">next</span>等； 比较：<span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>，<span word="for">for</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>等； 转折：<span word="but">but</span>，<span word="yet">yet</span>，<span word="however">however</span>等； 让步：<span word="although">although</span>, <span word="though">though</span>, <span word="as">as</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="spite">spite</span> <span word="of">of</span>等； 递进：<span word="besides">besides</span>，<span word="even">even</span>，<span word="what">what</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="more">more</span>，<span word="in">in</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>等； 举例：<span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>，<span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span>，<span word="like">like</span>，<span word="namely">namely</span>等； 总结：<span word="in">in</span> <span word="short">short</span>，<span word="in">in</span> <span word="general">general</span>，<span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="word">word</span>，<span word="to">to</span> <span word="sum">sum</span> <span word="up">up</span>等。 如： <span word="Tom">Tom</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bird">bird</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="bird">bird</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="wounded">wounded</span>.<span word="He">He</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bird">bird</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="zoo">zoo</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="zoo">zoo</span> <span word="praised">praised</span> <span word="him">him</span>.<span word="He">He</span> <span word="arrived">arrived</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="late">late</span>.<span word="He">He</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>. 以上虽然都是简单句，但<span word="Tom">Tom</span>的行为线索还是非常清晰的。不过，这样表达，句子显得松散，意思不够连贯。假如我们适当地添加关联词和运用一定的修辞手段，便可把<span word="Tom">Tom</span>的活动串成一段更加连贯的文字了： <span word="Tom">Tom</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wounded">wounded</span> <span word="bird">bird</span>，<span word="so">so</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bird">bird</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="zoo">zoo</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="zoo">zoo</span> <span word="praised">praised</span> <span word="him">him</span>.<span word="Though">Though</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="came">came</span></p>
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