2017高三英语二轮复习（江苏专用）主题36“记”：健康饮食
<p> 1．交叉使用长句与短句</p><p> 在英语写作中，过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好，正确的做法是，根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短句，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。</p><p> 【例句】 中午我们晒着太阳吃着野餐。休息一会儿后，我们唱歌的唱歌，跳舞的跳舞，还有的讲故事、下棋，大家玩得很开心。</p><p> 一般句：<span word="At">At</span> <span word="noon">noon</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="picnic">picnic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sunshine">sunshine</span>.<span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="rest">rest</span>.<span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="happily">happily</span>.<span word="We">We</span> <span word="sang">sang</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="danced">danced</span>.<span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="stories">stories</span>.<span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="played">played</span> <span word="chess">chess</span>.</p><p> 优秀句：<span word="At">At</span> <span word="noon">noon</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="picnic">picnic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sunshine">sunshine</span>.<span word="After">After</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="rest">rest</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="fun">fun</span> <span word="singing">singing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="dancing">dancing</span>，<span word="telling">telling</span> <span word="stories">stories</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="chess">chess</span>.</p><p> 避免同一词语的重复使用</p><p> 为了使文章更生动、更富表现力，同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思，尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字，就会立刻想起<span word="like">like</span>，事实上，英语中类似意思的词和短语很多，如<span word="love">love</span>，<span word="enjoy">enjoy</span>，<span word="prefer">prefer</span>，<span word="appreciate">appreciate</span>，<span word="be">be</span> <span word="fond">fond</span> <span word="of">of</span>，<span word="care">care</span> <span word="for">for</span>等。</p><p> 【例句】 我喜欢读书，而我的弟弟喜欢看电视。</p><p> 一般句：<span word="I">I</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="likes">likes</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="television">television</span>.</p><p> 优秀句：<span word="I">I</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="enjoys">enjoys</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="television">television</span>.</p>
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