2017高三英语二轮复习（江苏专用）主题36“记”：肢体语言
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="attempt">attempt</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="talented">talented</span> <span word="artists">artists</span>，<span word="musicians">musicians</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="writers">writers</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="seldom">seldom</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="masterpiece">masterpiece</span>.<span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="drafts">drafts</span> <span word="as">as</span> (彩排)，<span word="or">or</span> <span word="tryouts">tryouts</span>，<span word="revising">revising</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="seem">seem</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>__1__．</p><p> ？<span word="The">The</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="adding">adding</span>，<span word="deleting">deleting</span>，<span word="replacing">replacing</span>，<span word="reordering">reordering</span>，—__2__，<span word="underwent">underwent</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="process">process</span>.<span word="When">When</span> <span word="Lloyd">Lloyd</span> <span word="Webber">Webber</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1984，<span word="he">he</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="funny">funny</span>，<span word="exciting">exciting</span> <span word="production">production</span>.<span word="However">However</span>，<span word="when">when</span> ，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="audience">audience</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="psychological">psychological</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="music">music</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="musical">musical</span> <span word="had">had</span>__3__<span word="several">several</span> <span word="revisions">revisions</span> <span word="due">due</span>，<span word="in">in</span> <span word="part">part</span>，<span word="to">to</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="costuming">costuming</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="makeup">makeup</span>(戏服和化妆)．<span word="For">For</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>，<span word="Lloyd">Lloyd</span> <span word="Webber">Webber</span>__4__<span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="revise">revise</span>，<span word="you">you</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span>__5__ <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="evolving">evolving</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span>，<span word="or">or</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="include">include</span>__6__<span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="newly">newly</span> <span word="discovered">discovered</span> <span word="information">information</span>.</p><p> __7__，<span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="stage">stage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="process">process</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="writers">writers</span> <span word="revise">revise</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span>.<span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="to">to</span>__8__<span word="topics">topics</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="prewriting">prewriting</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="revising">revising</span>.<span word="However">However</span>，<span word="don">don</span>'<span word="t">t</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="skipping">skipping</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="revision">revision</span> <span word="stage">stage</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="follows">follows</span>__9__．<span word="Always">Always</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span>__10__<span word="and">and</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="dress">dress</span> <span word="rehearsal">rehearsal</span>，<span word="so">so</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="speak">speak</span>.<span word="Reviewing">Reviewing</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="you">you</span>__11<span word="new">new</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revising">Revising</span> <span word="involves">involves</span>__12__<span word="the">the</span> <span word="effectiveness">effectiveness</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="appropriateness">appropriateness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>，<span word="making">making</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="refocusing">refocusing</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="developing">developing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="facts">facts</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="present">present</span>.<span word="When">When</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="revise">revise</span>，<span word="ask">ask</span> <span word="yourself">yourself</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="questions">questions</span>，<span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="audience">audience</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>：<span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span>__13__<span word="throughout">throughout</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="draft">draft</span>？<span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="sight">sight</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span>？<span word="Have">Have</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="readers">readers</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span>__14__—<span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span>，<span word="facts">facts</span>，<span word="opinions">opinions</span>，<span word="inferences">inferences</span>—<span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>？<span word="Finally">Finally</span>，<span word="have">have</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="included">included</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="many">many</span>__15__<span word="details">details</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="confuse">confuse</span> <span word="readers">readers</span>?</p>
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