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2017届高考英语一轮循环写作周周练:第10周 言简意明的非谓语动词(新人教版含解析)

<p>  第十周 言简意明的非谓语动词</p><p>  众所周知,作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味,句子与句子之间的关系显得松散;而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘,读起来费劲。而恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换,不仅显得句式多样,句子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑,言简意明。</p><p>  一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句</p><p>  写作时,我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行转换,使其成为较高级的表达方式。转换时可采用“三步法”:</p><p>  第一步:写出两个简单句。第二步:找准两个简单句的对接点,让一个句子作为主干,另一个句子用非谓语动词进行改写。第三步:判断应用何种非谓语动词,把握好时态和语态,最后连接起来。 [示例]</p><p>  第一步:写出两个简单句。</p><p>  ①<span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="column">column</span> <span word="called">called</span> “<span word="Foreign">Foreign</span> <span word="Culture">Culture</span>”.</p><p>  ②<span word="It">It</span> <span word="aims">aims</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="introduce">introduce</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="customs">customs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="students">students</span>.</p><p>  第二步:让句①作主句,用非谓语动词改写句②。</p><p>  第三步:让句②作定语,由于其动词<span word="aim">aim</span>与主语<span word="it">it</span>之间为主谓关系,故用现在分词短语作定语。</p><p>  <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="column">column</span> <span word="called">called</span> “<span word="Foreign">Foreign</span> <span word="Culture">Culture</span>”, <span word="aiming">aiming</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="introduce">introduce</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="customs">customs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="students">students</span>.(2015·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)</p>
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