2016届高考英语（新课标全国卷Ⅰ）二轮复习课件：专题6 短文改错
<p> 三、行文逻辑错误 在高考短文改错中，有时考生会碰到词法方面和句法方面均没有错误的句子，此时就必须从行文逻辑上来判断句子的合理性。行文逻辑错误常见的有代词的指代错误,连词的逻辑意义错误等。这类错误很难被发现,而此类错误基本上都会有所涉及,所以针对这类题考生必须通过阅读全文来综合考虑。 1．代词的指代错误 代词的指代错误常见的是代词的指代对象、单复数及代词的格与文章的逻辑意义不一致，此外还有反身代词的错用等。这类错误通常较为隐蔽。</p><p> (2015·高考四川卷，节选)<span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="don">don</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="anymore">anymore</span>，<span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span>’<span word="m">m</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="I">I</span>’<span word="ll">ll</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span>.<span word="What">What</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="do">do</span>？<span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="me">me</span>，<span word="would">would</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="him">him</span>? 【解析】 根据上文可知，这里指作者的朋友们，此处代词指代错误，故<span word="him">him</span>改为<span word="them">them</span>。 【答案】 <span word="him">him</span>→<span word="them">them</span> 2．连词的逻辑意义错误</p><p> (2017·高考湖南卷，单项填空，改编)<span word="Make">Make</span> <span word="what">what</span></p><p> <span word="you">you</span>’<span word="re">re</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="today">today</span> <span word="important">important</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="you">you</span>’<span word="re">re</span> <span word="trading">trading</span> <span word="a">a</span></p><p> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>. 【解析】 本句是祈使句。句意：让你今日所做之事重要起 来，因为你是在用一天的生命换取它。前后为因果关系。 【答案】 去掉<span word="and">and</span> <span word="A">A</span> (2015·高考全国卷Ⅰ)<span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="hoped">hoped</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="there">there</span>.<span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="city">city</span>，<span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="miss">miss</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="countryside">countryside</span>.<span word="There">There</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="clean">clean</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mountains">mountains</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="green">green</span>.<span word="Unfortunately">Unfortunately</span>，<span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="industrialization">industrialization</span>，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="polluted">polluted</span>.<span word="Lots">Lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="global">global</span> <span word="warming">warming</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="already">already</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="airs">airs</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="breathe">breathe</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="dirtier">dirtier</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="dirtier">dirtier</span>.<span word="Much">Much</span> <span word="rare">rare</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="dying">dying</span> <span word="out">out</span>.<span word="We">We</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>.<span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="so">so</span>，<span word="we">we</span>’<span word="ll">ll</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="regret">regret</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="B">B</span> (2015·高考全国卷Ⅱ)<span word="One">One</span> <span word="day">day</span>，<span word="little">little</span> <span word="Tony">Tony</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="center">center</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="parent">parent</span>.<span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="crowded">crowded</span>.<span word="Tony">Tony</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="toy">toy</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="shop">shop</span> <span word="window">window</span>.<span word="He">He</span> <span word="liked">liked</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="walked">walked</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shop">shop</span>.<span word="After">After</span> <span word="looks">looks</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="toy">toy</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="time">time</span>，<span word="he">he</span> <span word="turned">turned</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="missing">missing</span>.<span word="Tony">Tony</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="scared">scared</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="begun">begun</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cry">cry</span>.<span word="A">A</span> <span word="woman">woman</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="crying">crying</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="telling">telling</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wait">wait</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="shop">shop</span>.<span word="Five">Five</span> <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="later">later</span>，<span word="Tony">Tony</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>.<span word="Mom">Mom</span> <span word="said">said</span>，“<span word="How">How</span> <span word="nice">nice</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="again">again</span>！<span word="Dad">Dad</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="terrible">terrible</span> <span word="worried">worried</span>.” <span word="Tony">Tony</span> <span word="promised">promised</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="happen">happen</span> <span word="again">again</span>. <span word="C">C</span> (2017·高考全国卷Ⅰ)<span word="Nearly">Nearly</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="before">before</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="father">father</span>，<span word="my">my</span> <span word="sister">sister</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="planted">planted</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="cherry">cherry</span> <span word="tomatoes">tomatoes</span>(圣女果)<span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="garden">garden</span>.<span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="then">then</span>—<span word="for">for</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="year">year</span>—<span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="allowing">allowing</span> <span word="tomatoes">tomatoes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="self">self</span>－<span word="seed">seed</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="please">please</span>.<span word="As">As</span> <span word="result">result</span>，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="plants">plants</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="somewhere">somewhere</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="fruits">fruits</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="size">size</span>，<span word="but">but</span> <span word="juicy">juicy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="taste">taste</span>.<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="neighbors">neighbors</span>.<span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="tomato">tomato</span> <span word="plants">plants</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="year">year</span>，<span word="but">but</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="disease">disease</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="insect">insect</span> <span word="attack">attack</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.<span word="We">We</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="wonderfully">wonderfully</span> <span word="tomatoes">tomatoes</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="cost">cost</span>!</p>
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