2017届高考英语一轮复习全套课件：第3部分 写作指导 提分策略8 段落写作（北师大版）
<p> 典例 (2015·浙江高考)在班级活动中,当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时,你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人,还是尊重大多数同学的意见?请你以“<span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>”为题,用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文。要求如下: 1.从以上两种做法中选择一种; 2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。 <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span></p><p> 【参考范文】 <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="opinions">opinions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="organizing">organizing</span> <span word="class">class</span> <span word="activities">activities</span>.<span word="We">We</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>.<span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stick">stick</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span>.<span word="By">By</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="so">so</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span>. <span word="Once">Once</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="discussing">discussing</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="outing">outing</span>.<span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="park">park</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nicer">nicer</span> <span word="place">place</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="managed">managed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="persuade">persuade</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="accepting">accepting</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>.<span word="We">We</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="day">day</span>.<span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="opinions">opinions</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="worth">worth</span> <span word="sticking">sticking</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="all">all</span>.</p><p> 【思路点拨】 试题要求考生选择一种做法并以具体事例阐述选择的理由。文中可以使用一般现在时(在叙述个人经历时使用过去时)和第一人称。 考生可从个人或者熟悉的人的经历中找出与之适合的事例。写作时注意语言组织以及串联词的使用。上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合选择的观点。 文章分为两段。第一段,从两种做法中选择一种。可用词汇及结构:<span word="stick">stick</span> <span word="to">to</span>,<span word="share">share</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="with">with</span>,<span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>,<span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span>,<span word="majority">majority</span>等。第二段,结合个人经历(如:班上讨论旅游地点,是否野餐等)讲述理由,可以巧妙利用时间状语衔接上下文。注意记叙过程中一定要保证动词时态的一致。可用词汇及结构:<span word="persuade">persuade</span>,<span word="benefit">benefit</span>,<span word="stick">stick</span> <span word="to">to</span>,<span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span>,<span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="habit">habit</span> <span word="of">of</span>等。</p>
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