近三年高考（2017-2016）英语试题分项版解析：专题25 开放式（解析版）
<p> 2016年高考题</p><p> 1.【2016·全国新课标<span word="I">I</span>】书面表达（满分25分）</p><p> 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（<span word="resume">resume</span>）。给外教<span word="Mr">Mr</span> <span word="Jenkins">Jenkins</span> 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（<span word="format">format</span>）</p><p> 注意：</p><p> 1. 词数100左右;</p><p> 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。</p><p> 【答案】</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Ms">Ms</span> <span word="Jenkins">Jenkins</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Hua">Hua</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="coming">coming</span> <span word="summer">summer</span> <span word="vacation">vacation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="favor">favor</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="capital">capital</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="havealready">havealready</span> <span word="finished">finished</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="personals">personals</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="don">don</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span>. <span word="So">So</span>, <span word="I">I</span>’<span word="m">m</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span>, <span word="hoping">hoping</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="help">help</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="favor">favor</span>.</p><p> <span word="Looking">Looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="And">And</span> <span word="I">I</span>’<span word="d">d</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="thankful">thankful</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Hua">Hua</span></p><p> 【名师点睛】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语<span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>,、现在分词短语<span word="hoping">hoping</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="help">help</span>、宾语从句<span word="if">if</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span>等。经典句式<span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="personals">personals</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>也是文章的亮点所在。</p>
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