2017届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编（第02期）：专题06 书面表达（教师版）
<p> 2017届高考模拟试题分类汇编（2）之书面表达</p><p> 参考词汇：雾霾<span word="haze">haze</span></p><p> 雾霾天气<span word="hazy">hazy</span> <span word="weather">weather</span></p><p> <span word="Recently">Recently</span> <span word="hazy">hazy</span> <span word="weather">weather</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="China">China</span>._______________</p><p> 【答案】</p><p> <span word="Recently">Recently</span> <span word="hazy">hazy</span> <span word="weather">weather</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="China">China</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="harm">harm</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="throughout">throughout</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="hazy">hazy</span> <span word="weather">weather</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="effects">effects</span>. <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="people">people</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="threatened">threatened</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="coughing">coughing</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="jams">jams</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="arise">arise</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="disturbs">disturbs</span> <span word="people">people</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="normal">normal</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> <span word="Faced">Faced</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="supposed">supposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="protection">protection</span>. <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="sending">sending</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="harmful">harmful</span> <span word="gases">gases</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="saved">saved</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Meanwhile">Meanwhile</span>, <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="attached">attached</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="planting">planting</span> <span word="trees">trees</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="measures">measures</span>, <span word="will">will</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="difference">difference</span>.</p><p> 【亮点说明】这是一篇通讯稿，采用三段式，语言简练，结构分明，布局合理，运用高级句子。<span word="Recently">Recently</span> <span word="hazy">hazy</span> <span word="weather">weather</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="China">China</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="harm">harm</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>.使用非限制性定语从句；<span word="It">It</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="hazy">hazy</span> <span word="weather">weather</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="effects">effects</span>.<span word="it">it</span>作形式主语，真主语是后面的主语从句；<span word="Faced">Faced</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="supposed">supposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="protection">protection</span>.过去分词作状语；<span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="sending">sending</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="harmful">harmful</span> <span word="gases">gases</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="saved">saved</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>.句中体现部分倒装；<span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="measures">measures</span>, <span word="will">will</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="difference">difference</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span>加后跟状语位于句子开头，句子用部分倒装堪称经典；另外句中使用<span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="Meanwhile">Meanwhile</span>,</p>
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