2016届高考英语二轮复习攻关篇课件：题型6 书面表达6.2.2（新课标全国通用）
<p> 专题二 校园生活 该话题在高考英语书面表达中屡见不鲜。内容主要涉及课程设置、课外活动(讲座、运动会、各类竞赛)、饮食起居、师生友谊和绿色校园等。写作类型常用记叙文、日记、演讲稿、通知等。 【典例示范】(2015北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中,向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程,并以“<span word="A">A</span> <span word="Day">Day</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Craftsman">Craftsman</span>”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。 注意:词数不少于60。 提示词:一个面团 <span word="a">a</span> <span word="piece">piece</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="dough">dough</span> 面人 <span word="dough">dough</span> <span word="figurine">figurine</span> 【审题谋篇】 本文是一篇记叙文。试题以四幅图的形式展现了一个活动的过程。我们首先要审好图中的内容,用规范的语言描述下来,然后把四幅图用恰当的语言手段整合起来。人称宜用第一人称;时态用过去时。 【范文展示】</p><p> <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="Tuesday">Tuesday</span>,<span word="our">our</span> <span word="class">class</span> <span word="invited">invited</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="craftsman">craftsman</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="dough">dough</span> <span word="figurines">figurines</span>.</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="craftsman">craftsman</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="classroom">classroom</span>,①<span word="we">we</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="welcome">welcome</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="boys">boys</span> <span word="helped">helped</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tool">tool</span> <span word="box">box</span>.<span word="First">First</span>,<span word="he">he</span> <span word="showed">showed</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="basic">basic</span> <span word="steps">steps</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="dough">dough</span> <span word="figurines">figurines</span>.<span word="We">We</span> <span word="stood">stood</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="watched">watched</span> <span word="attentively">attentively</span>.<span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="started">started</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="walked">walked</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="helped">helped</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="patiently">patiently</span>.<span word="Finally">Finally</span>,<span word="we">we</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="figurines">figurines</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="table">table</span>② <span word="and">and</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="craftsman">craftsman</span>.<span word="Looking">Looking</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="figurines">figurines</span>,<span word="we">we</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="excited">excited</span>.③ <span word="We">We</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="kind">kind</span>! 范文使用了<span word="First">First</span>,<span word="Then">Then</span>,<span word="Finally">Finally</span>等来衔接句子和段落,表示事情发生的时间顺序,使作文更有条理,做到了行文连贯。全文使用的是一般过去时,注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。 句①为<span word="when">when</span>引导的时间状语从句。 句②为定语从句。 句③中用动词-<span word="ing">ing</span>形式作状语。语法知识使用得当,叙事清晰。 <span word="A">A</span> <span word="B">B</span> <span word="A">A</span> (2015石家庄二模) 假定你是李华。校学生会正在举办“魅力中学生”评选报名活动,旨在给学生提供展示风采的舞台,为大家树立学习的榜样。下面的海报吸引了正在你校访问的美国学生<span word="Catherine">Catherine</span>的关注。请向她介绍此次活动,并阐述你心目中“魅力中学生”的标准。 <span word="A">A</span> <span word="B">B</span> 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.首句已给出,不计入总词数。 <span word="The">The</span> <span word="poster">poster</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="selection">selection</span> <span word="registration">registration</span> <span word="named">named</span> <span word="Charming">Charming</span> <span word="Students">Students</span>.<span word="A">A</span> <span word="B">B</span> 参考范文: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="poster">poster</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="selection">selection</span> <span word="registration">registration</span> <span word="named">named</span> <span word="Charming">Charming</span> <span word="Students">Students</span>.<span word="This">This</span> <span word="activity">activity</span>,<span word="organized">organized</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Students">Students</span>’ <span word="Union">Union</span>,<span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="stage">stage</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="talents">talents</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="sets">sets</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="follow">follow</span>.<span word="Anyone">Anyone</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="participate">participate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="activity">activity</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="online">online</span>.<span word="And">And</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="deadline">deadline</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="May">May</span> 20<span word="th">th</span>.<span word="To">To</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="charming">charming</span> <span word="students">students</span>,<span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>,<span word="they">they</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="someone">someone</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="us">us</span>,<span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="life">life</span>,<span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="ready">ready</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="others">others</span>.<span word="Besides">Besides</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="performance">performance</span>,<span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="supposed">supposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span>,<span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="singing">singing</span>,<span word="dancing">dancing</span>,<span word="painting">painting</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sports">sports</span>.<span word="Having">Having</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="creative">creative</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="equally">equally</span> <span word="important">important</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="B">B</span> <span word="B">B</span> (2015成都三模) 假如你是中学生李平。最近你校规定:学生在校期间,禁止到校外就餐。现在,请你就此事给校报英文版编辑写一封信,内容包括: 1.学校制定此规定的理由; 2.同学们对此规定的反应及理由; 3.你的看法。 注意:1.词数120左右;信的开头与结束语已写好,不计入总词数; 2.文中不得透露你和所在学校的真实名字; 3.参考词汇:食堂 <span word="canteen">canteen</span> [<span word="C">C</span>] <span word="A">A</span> <span word="B">B</span> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="editor">editor</span>, <span word="Best">Best</span> <span word="wishes">wishes</span>! <span word="Yours">Yours</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ping">Ping</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="B">B</span> 参考范文: <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="editor">editor</span>,<span word="I">I</span>’<span word="m">m</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="rule">rule</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="forbidden">forbidden</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="days">days</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="says">says</span>,<span word="for">for</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="campus">campus</span> <span word="isn">isn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="can">can</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="guaranteed">guaranteed</span>,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="another">another</span>,<span word="if">if</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="meals">meals</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="canteen">canteen</span>,<span word="they">they</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="cheaper">cheaper</span>. <span word="However">However</span>,<span word="some">some</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rule">rule</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.<span word="First">First</span>,<span word="they">they</span> <span word="dislike">dislike</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="canteen">canteen</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="quality">quality</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="forced">forced</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="meal">meal</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="B">B</span> <span word="Personally">Personally</span>,<span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="meals">meals</span> <span word="inside">inside</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="campus">campus</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="taste">taste</span> <span word="nicer">nicer</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="larger">larger</span> <span word="variety">variety</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="food">food</span>,<span word="too">too</span>. <span word="Best">Best</span> <span word="wishes">wishes</span>!<span word="Yours">Yours</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ping">Ping</span> </p>
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