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2017届高考英语一轮复习《全优课堂》写作技能步步高写作层级特训:要诀4.4.满分作文登场(新人教版含答案)

<p>  第三部分 要诀四</p><p>  (2017湖北)</p><p>  请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。</p><p>  <span word="Small">Small</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="difference">difference</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p>  注意:</p><p>  ①无须写标题;</p><p>  ②除诗歌外,文体不限;</p><p>  ③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;</p><p>  ④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;</p><p>  ⑤词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。</p><p>  考场作文</p><p>  <span word="From">From</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="knew">knew</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="isn">isn</span>'<span word="t">t</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p>  <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="remember">remember</span> ①<span word="a">a</span> <span word="incident">incident</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rainy">rainy</span> <span word="Sunday">Sunday</span> <span word="afternoon">afternoon</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bookstore">bookstore</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="was">was</span> ②<span word="waiting">waiting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="green">green</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="crossing">crossing</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="knocked">knocked</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="passing">passing</span> <span word="car">car</span> (1)<span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="drove">drove</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span>.<span word="A">A</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="immediately">immediately</span> <span word="rushed">rushed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="aid">aid</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="joined">joined</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="hesitation">hesitation</span>.③<span word="Comparing">Comparing</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="escaped">escaped</span> <span word="driver">driver</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="proud">proud</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="did">did</span>.</p><p>  <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="that">that</span> (2)<span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="creating">creating</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p>  1.错误聚焦:</p><p>  (1)<span word="incident">incident</span>的首字母发元音音素,故应将①<span word="a">a</span>改为______。</p><p>  (2)<span word="wait">wait</span>是不及物动词,故应在②<span word="waiting">waiting</span>后加介词____________。</p>
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