【名师小课堂】2017届高三英语新人教版一轮复习阅读写作技能课件：24 写好长句的技巧
<p> 基础写作要求考生用5句话表达全部内容，因为一篇基础写作题中通常有七八个信息点，要用五个句子表达出来，就是需要考生能写好长句。长句的手段一般包括：使用从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、状语从句)、介词短语、同位语、非谓语动词、插入语等。这里着重练习介绍人物、节日及建筑物的长句写法。</p><p> 写好长句的技巧 用一句话表达下列信息点。 姓名：李明 职务：班长 外貌特征：个子高 性格特点：很活跃 在介绍人物的身份、外貌和性格特征等时可用以下方法： 方法1：同位语 <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>, (<span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span>) <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tall">tall</span>, <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="active">active</span> <span word="boy">boy</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="monitor">monitor</span>.</p><p> 经典例题 <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>, <span word="monitor">monitor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="class">class</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="tall">tall</span>, <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="active">active</span>. 方法2：定语从句 <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="tall">tall</span>, <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="active">active</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="monitor">monitor</span>. 方法3：<span word="with">with</span>介词短语表示伴随状况 <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="monitor">monitor</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="body">body</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="active">active</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>.</p><p> 1.用一个句子介绍以下人物。(三种表达) 姓名：陈燮霞；职业：女子举重运动员；身高：150<span word="cm">cm</span>；体重：47.5<span word="kg">kg</span>；出生日期：1983年1月8日；出生地点：广东省广州市。 方法1：同位语+定语(定语从句或短语) <span word="Chen">Chen</span> <span word="Xiexia">Xiexia</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="female">female</span> <span word="weight">weight</span>-<span word="lifter">lifter</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="born">born</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="January">January</span> 8<span word="th">th</span>, 1983 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Guangzhou">Guangzhou</span> <span word="City">City</span>, <span word="Guangdong">Guangdong</span> <span word="Province">Province</span>, <span word="is">is</span> 150<span word="cm">cm</span> <span word="tall">tall</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="weighs">weighs</span> 47.5 <span word="kg">kg</span>. 即学即用 方法2：过去分词短语开头；<span word="with">with</span>介词短语 <span word="Born">Born</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="January">January</span> 8<span word="th">th</span>, 1983 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Guangzhou">Guangzhou</span> <span word="City">City</span>, <span word="Guangdong">Guangdong</span> <span word="Province">Province</span>, <span word="Chen">Chen</span> <span word="Xiexia">Xiexia</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="female">female</span> <span word="weight">weight</span>-<span word="lifter">lifter</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="height">height</span> <span word="of">of</span> 150 <span word="cm">cm</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="weight">weight</span> <span word="of">of</span> 47.5 <span word="kg">kg</span>. 方法3：<span word="as">as</span>介词短语 <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="weight">weight</span>-<span word="lifter">lifter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span>, <span word="Chen">Chen</span> <span word="Xiexia">Xiexia</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="born">born</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="January">January</span> 8<span word="th">th</span>, 1983 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Guangzhou">Guangzhou</span> <span word="City">City</span>, <span word="Guangdong">Guangdong</span> <span word="Province">Province</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="is">is</span> 150 <span word="cm">cm</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="height">height</span> <span word="and">and</span> 47.5 <span word="kg">kg</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="weight">weight</span>.</p>
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