2017届高考英语一轮复习写作增分技巧讲解课件：5 教你如何行文及润色
<p> 写作进阶提升之五 ——教你如何行文及润色</p><p> 写作进阶提升 五个步骤 1、审题 （文体、主题、内容、人称、时态） 2、提炼要点，思考关键词 3、紧扣要点，连词成句 4、连句成文： ①主语和谓语 ②背景（增加时间、地点条件等） ③逻辑关系 ④开头与结尾 5、检查修改，规范抄写 ⑤语篇衔接</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="noise">noise</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="disturb">disturb</span> <span word="others">others</span>.</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="others">others</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="animals">animals</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lonely">lonely</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="choice">choice</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="animals">animals</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="enrich">enrich</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="too">too</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="animals">animals</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="needn">needn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="fair">fair</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="animals">animals</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="donate">donate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="animal">animal</span> <span word="organizations">organizations</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="helpful">helpful</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="animals">animals</span>.</p><p> (<span word="By">By</span> <span word="Dong">Dong</span> <span word="Shuoyi">Shuoyi</span>)</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="dogs">dogs</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="noise">noise</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="community">community</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sometime">sometime</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="hurt">hurt</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="animal">animal</span> <span word="drops">drops</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="pollute">pollute</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="don">don</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>.</p><p> <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="admit">admit</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="mentioned">mentioned</span>, <span word="compared">compared</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highlights">highlights</span>, <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="shortcomings">shortcomings</span> <span word="seem">seem</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="pencil">pencil</span> <span word="tip">tip</span>.</p>
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