2017《夺冠之路》高三一轮人教版英语（安徽专用）：方法技巧书面表达精品课件
<p> 根据高考最新《考试大纲》、书面表达的评分标准以及每年高考后的阅卷情况，我们可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点： 1．外在美 一篇优秀的书面表达首先就是一件艺术品，书写清楚，字母大小匀称，单词间距适当，没有明显修改痕迹。请欣赏下面范文干净、整齐的卷面效果： 3．词汇美 从书面表达的评分标准可知，运用高级词汇对提高书面表达的“档次”和得分至关重要。我们常常提到“亮点词汇”，这不等于使用一些偏词、怪词，而是要使用一些生动、具体、形象的词语，并且要运用得准确得体。如“<span word="The">The</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span>.”不如表达成“<span word="The">The</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="challenging">challenging</span>.”能显示出考生深厚的语言功底。在阅读时要注意积累富有表达力的词汇。词语的选择也应尽可能做到个性张扬，标新立异。在表达相同的意思时，表达方式的变换显得尤为重要。选择使用其恰当的同义词或词组可反映出考生较强的英语运用能力，同时也避免使人感到单调和乏味。请体会下列句子中高级词汇的妙用： (1)<span word="We">We</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="invitation">invitation</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span>.(2010·新课标全国卷Ⅰ) (2)<span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="looking">looking</span>_<span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="giving">giving</span>_<span word="a">a</span>_<span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span>_<span word="through">through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exam">exam</span> <span word="successfully">successfully</span>.(2010·山东卷) (3)<span word="Hope">Hope</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span>_<span word="in">in</span>_<span word="close">close</span>_<span word="touch">touch</span>.(2010·陕西卷) (4)<span word="As">As</span>_<span word="for">for</span> <span word="cells">cells</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Web">Web</span>，<span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>.(2010·安徽卷) (5)<span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>，<span word="an">an</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="way">way</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span>，<span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reserve">reserve</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="use">use</span>.(2010·福建卷) 此外，运用情感性语言可以增强文章的可读性和醒目性，吸引阅卷老师的注意，震撼读者的心灵，引起共鸣。如： <span word="If">If</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chance">chance</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="effort">effort</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="well">well</span>.(2010·天津卷) <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="smile">smile</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="whenever">whenever</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wherever">wherever</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>.(2009·福建卷) <span word="Seeing">Seeing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lines">lines</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="trees">trees</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="achievement">achievement</span>. (2009·北京卷) 4．句式美 句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用会使本来结构单一、语句乏味的文章极具可读性。合并简单句使文章的语言由松散变得凝练。简单句虽然短小精悍，但在语言表达上，不能单一地只注重简单句的正确运用，还应多运用一些并列句或复合句，使句式灵活多变。考生在写作时，可以巧变感叹句，增强语言的表达力；省略与替代交替使用，避免写作时不必要的重复与累赘，使句子更简练、精确；主动句与被动句交替使用，使句子更具多样性；分词(短语)及<span word="with">with</span>复合结构结合使用，使得文章句子结构紧凑，描述形象生动，为文章增色。请体会下列优美的句式： (1)虚拟语气：<span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>，<span word="it">it</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="it">it</span>.(2010·福建卷) (2)定语从句：<span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mine">mine</span> <span word="facing">facing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="coming">coming</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="exam">exam</span>，<span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span>.(2010·山东卷) (3)让步状语从句：<span word="First">First</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="patient">patient</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="warm">warm</span><span word="hearted">hearted</span>，<span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="whatever">whatever</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="life">life</span>.(2010·天津卷)</p>
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