高考英语作文素材:春节纪事-LifeinSpringFestivalnbs作文素材
<p> 春节纪事-<span word="Life">Life</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Spring">Spring</span> <span word="Festival">Festival</span> & <span word="nbs">nbs</span></p><p> 春节纪事 【内容提示】 假定你是一个青年人,名叫 <span word="Laura">Laura</span> <span word="Moss">Moss</span>,你的中国朋友请你到中国来过春节。春节前6天,当地有一个儿童篝火节,你和你的朋友要去参加。请你用倒叙法制造出一些悬念来,叙述你们参加篝火节的经过。 【作文示范】 <span word="Life">Life</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Spring">Spring</span> <span word="Festival">Festival</span> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Eve">Eve</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Spring">Spring</span> <span word="Festival">Festival</span>. <span word="Dusk">Dusk</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="falling">falling</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="slurped">slurped</span>① <span word="up">up</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="bit">bit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="rice">rice</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="laid">laid</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="chopsticks">chopsticks</span>. “<span word="They">They</span>'<span word="re">re</span> <span word="starting">starting</span>!” <span word="cried">cried</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="excitedly">excitedly</span>. “<span word="Quick">Quick</span>! <span word="Quick">Quick</span>!” <span word="Outside">Outside</span>, <span word="children">children</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="running">running</span> <span word="everywhere">everywhere</span>. <span word="Their">Their</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="voices">voices</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="faces">faces</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="inside">inside</span>, <span word="despite">despite</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cold">cold</span> <span word="wind">wind</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="greeted">greeted</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="thrust">thrust</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bundle">bundle</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="straw">straw</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="hands">hands</span>. “<span word="Come">Come</span>!” <span word="he">he</span> <span word="cried">cried</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="giggled">giggled</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="ran">ran</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="catch">catch</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="him">him</span>; <span word="the">the</span> <span word="children">children</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="excitement">excitement</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fever">fever</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="spread">spread</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="joined">joined</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rowdy">rowdy</span> <span word="bunch">bunch</span>② <span word="of">of</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="teenagers">teenagers</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bonfire">bonfire</span>③ <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="path">path</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="ran">ran</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wheat">wheat</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>. “<span word="Here">Here</span>,”<span word="said">said</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friend">friend</span>, <span word="handing">handing</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="bamboo">bamboo</span> <span word="pole">pole</span>. “<span word="Put">Put</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="straw">straw</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fire">fire</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="tie">tie</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="onto">onto</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="pole">pole</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="this">this</span>.” <span word="He">He</span> <span word="demonstrated">demonstrated</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="materials">materials</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="followed">followed</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="example">example</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="thrust">thrust</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="torches">torches</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fire">fire</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="handed">handed</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="mine">mine</span>. “<span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="run">run</span>!” <span word="And">And</span> <span word="run">run</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="did">did</span>----<span word="we">we</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="did">did</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="miles">miles</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="miles">miles</span> <span word="around">around</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="see">see</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="orange">orange</span> <span word="specks">specks</span> <span word="scattered">scattered</span> <span word="about">about</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="hear">hear</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="distant">distant</span> <span word="screaming">screaming</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="laughing">laughing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="running">running</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rice">rice</span> <span word="field">field</span> <span word="path">path</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="night">night</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="helped">helped</span> <span word="build">build</span> <span word="fires">fires</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="eye">eye</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="children">children</span>. <span word="Occasionally">Occasionally</span> <span word="I">I</span>, <span word="too">too</span>, <span word="lit">lit</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="torch">torch</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ran">ran</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mad">mad</span> <span word="man">man</span>, <span word="screaming">screaming</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="waving">waving</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="flaming">flaming</span>④ <span word="bamboo">bamboo</span> <span word="pole">pole</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="festival">festival</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="New">New</span> <span word="Year">Year</span>, <span word="was">was</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Spring">Spring</span> <span word="Festival">Festival</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="explained">explained</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="festival">festival</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="fun">fun</span> <span word="burning">burning</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="straw">straw</span> <span word="leftover">leftover</span> ⑤ <span word="after">after</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="harvest">harvest</span>. <span word="Later">Later</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ash">ash</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="fertilizer">fertilizer</span>. (选自1988年7月12日《上海学生英文报》) 【词语解释】 ①<span word="slurp">slurp</span>[<span word="sl">sl</span>+:<span word="p">p</span>]<span word="v">v</span>. 咂咂地吃 ②<span word="rowdy">rowdy</span> <span word="bunch">bunch</span>['<span word="raudi">raudi</span> <span word="b">b</span>)<span word="ntM">ntM</span>] 爱吵闹的一伙 ③ <span word="bonfire">bonfire</span> ['<span word="b">b</span>&<span word="n">n</span>?<span word="fai">fai</span>+] <span word="n">n</span>. 大篝火;营火 ④<span word="flaming">flaming</span> ['<span word="fleimiR">fleimiR</span>] <span word="a">a</span>. 燃烧的;火红的 ⑤<span word="leftover">leftover</span> ['<span word="left">left</span>?+<span word="uv">uv</span>+] <span word="n">n</span>. 剩余物 【写法指要】 本文作者采用倒叙的方法,描写了春节前参加小孩子们组织的篝火节的场面。但是,作者在整篇文章里都没有明说这是一个什么节日,而是让读者从全文反映出来的意义自己去概括,给该节日命名。因此,我们说该作者巧用了英语中所讲的反映意义(<span word="reflectional">reflectional</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span>) 来设置悬念。文章中悬念的另一种表现方法是没有直接叙述作者与朋友去参加活动,而是写“我”刚放下筷子朋友就催促我说“<span word="They">They</span>'<span word="re">re</span> <span word="starting">starting</span>!”。这样便会引起读者看完全文的兴趣。</p>
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