2017届高考英语牛津译林版必修1总复习教案《Unit 1 School life（江苏专用）
<p> <span word="Unit">Unit</span> 1 <span word="School">School</span> <span word="life">life</span></p><p> 晨读在线</p><p> 1．假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文：简要描述右图内容，并点明主题；</p><p> 联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示。</p><p> 注意：1. 词数不少于120个；</p><p> 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。</p><p> 【范文欣赏】 请进行完形填空(每空一词)</p><p> <span word="One">One</span> <span word="drop">drop</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="easily">easily</span> <span word="disappears">disappears</span>，<span word="while">while</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sea">sea</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="dry">dry</span> <span word="up">up</span>；<span word="billions">billions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="drops">drops</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="river">river</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="rivers">rivers</span> <span word="run">run</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sea">sea</span>. 1. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fierce">fierce</span> <span word="sand">sand</span> <span word="storm">storm</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="conserve">conserve</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="soil">soil</span>，<span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="forest">forest</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="composed">composed</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="millions">millions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="trees">trees</span>，2. <span word="which">which</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="creatures">creatures</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="home">home</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="person">person</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="limited">limited</span>，3. <span word="but">but</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="endless">endless</span> <span word="wisdom">wisdom</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="masses">masses</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="creative">creative</span> <span word="power">power</span>.4. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="word">word</span>，<span word="unity">unity</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="strength">strength</span>.</p><p> <span word="iety">iety</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="huge">huge</span> <span word="family">family</span>. <span word="Just">Just</span> 7. <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proverb">proverb</span> <span word="goes">goes</span>，<span word="united">united</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="stand">stand</span>，<span word="divided">divided</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="fall">fall</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="try">try</span> 8. <span word="our">our</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="contribution">contribution</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="society">society</span>. (133 <span word="words">words</span>)</p><p> 【名师点评】 第一段对图画的内容进行了简单的描述，并点明了主题：团结就是力量(<span word="Unity">Unity</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="strength">strength</span>)。第二段联系实际并表达了该图给我们的启示：团结则立，分裂则废(<span word="United">United</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="stand">stand</span>，<span word="divided">divided</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="fall">fall</span>)。文章层次清楚，内容符合题目要求。两个非限制性定语从句<span word="which">which</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="creatures">creatures</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="home">home</span>/<span word="Just">Just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proverb">proverb</span> <span word="goes">goes</span>以及一个同位语从句<span word="that">that</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="consists">consists</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="society">society</span>的正确使用，体现了作者扎实的语言基本功。高级词汇<span word="fierce">fierce</span>，<span word="conserve">conserve</span>，<span word="be">be</span> <span word="composed">composed</span> <span word="of">of</span>，<span word="instructive">instructive</span>，<span word="consist">consist</span> <span word="ofindividual">ofindividual</span>，<span word="proverb">proverb</span>，<span word="contribution">contribution</span>等的运用恰到好处。连接词<span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="word">word</span>，<span word="therefore">therefore</span>的使用让文章过渡自然。文章中最长的句子28个词，最短的5个词，长短句结合使语言在句式的变换中增强了表现力。文中的两句谚语，足以证明作者平时对语言的积累程度。总之，该文语言流畅、有文采、有思想。这么优秀的作文，阅卷老师能不给满分吗？</p>
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