河南省新密一高高三英语《作文讲评》课件
<p> 北京卷写作批改记录 你的写作都有什么问题？ 1 卷面太差，书写不认真 （要想得20分以上没有好的卷面不可能） 2 审题不认真，（原文图画上是正在上课时 一位老师摔倒了，而有些学生看成一位同学生病了） 3 写作风格不对，英语写作要求开门见山 直奔主题禁忌穿鞋带帽 4 篇幅太短，只有框架，没有内容 5 文章不分段，或乱分段 6无时态概念，乱用时态 写作中的具体错误 1 单词拼写错误；诊所</p><p> 脚踝，聊天 讲台</p><p> 2 动词的过去式过去分词如 <span word="ring">ring</span>,<span word="stand">stand</span>,<span word="teach">teach</span>, 3 语法错误： 1 <span word="Thanks">Thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="monitor">monitor</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="calm">calm</span>,</p><p> 2 <span word="while">while</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="focus">focus</span> <span word="on">on</span></p><p> 3 <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="rest">rest</span></p><p> 4 <span word="She">She</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span></p><p> 5 <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="feeling">feeling</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sweet">sweet</span></p><p> 6 <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="aid">aid</span> ,<span word="she">she</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="back">back</span></p><p> 7 <span word="We">We</span> <span word="swiftly">swiftly</span> <span word="realized">realized</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="happened">happened</span></p><p> 8 <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="returned">returned</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wheelchair">wheelchair</span></p><p> 9 <span word="We">We</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fully">fully</span> <span word="recovery">recovery</span> 怎样提高你的写作水平呢? 1 要有高分意识 2 平时要有意识积累好的 单词，短语，句子 3 要多动手，不要眼高手低 4</p><p> 要善于仿写不同类型的作文 5 背范文，从范文中汲取精华 6 多背地道的英语句子，避免汉语式英语 北京卷范文赏析</p>
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