6分SAT写作范文欣赏
<p><span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="prosperity">prosperity</span> <span word="and">and</span>“<span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="ahead">ahead</span>” <span word="in">in</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="highlyvalued">highlyvalued</span>, <span word="creativity">creativity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="shunted">shunted</span> <span word="infavor">infavor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="more">more</span> “<span word="practical">practical</span>” <span word="pursuits">pursuits</span>. <span word="Studentsabandon">Studentsabandon</span> <span word="dreams">dreams</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="acting">acting</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="painting">painting</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="tomajor">tomajor</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="medicine">medicine</span>, <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="orengineering">orengineering</span>: <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="profitable">profitable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>.<span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advances">advances</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>, <span word="however">however</span>,<span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="creativity">creativity</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="world">world</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="seeing">seeing</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="allthe">allthe</span> <span word="difference">difference</span>.</p><p><span word="Today">Today</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="forced">forced</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="abandon">abandon</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="maketime">maketime</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="math">math</span>: <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="basicknowledge">basicknowledge</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="succeed">succeed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="leaving">leaving</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="behind">behind</span>,<span word="children">children</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="deprived">deprived</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="creative">creative</span> <span word="stimulation">stimulation</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="provide">provide</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="taught">taught</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="viewthe">viewthe</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="in">in</span> “<span word="black">black</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="white">white</span>” <span word="terms">terms</span>: <span word="one">one</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="asthis">asthis</span>, <span word="how">how</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="perform">perform</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>? <span word="It">It</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="assumed">assumed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="thingsthe">thingsthe</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="way">way</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="propose">propose</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="solution">solution</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>, <span word="failing">failing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bigger">bigger</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>.</p><p><span word="Creativity">Creativity</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="obviously">obviously</span> <span word="influenced">influenced</span> <span word="earlier">earlier</span> <span word="generations">generations</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="way">way</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="needto">needto</span> <span word="eliminate">eliminate</span> <span word="creativity">creativity</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="Franklin">Franklin</span> <span word="Roosevelt">Roosevelt</span> <span word="hadnever">hadnever</span> <span word="proposed">proposed</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="New">New</span> <span word="Deal">Deal</span>? <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Great">Great</span> <span word="Depression">Depression</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="persisted">persisted</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="time">time</span>,<span word="robbing">robbing</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="prosperity">prosperity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="byproposing">byproposing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span>, <span word="creative">creative</span> <span word="solution">solution</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="U">U</span>.<span word="S">S</span>.’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="depression">depression</span>, <span word="FDR">FDR</span> <span word="pulled">pulled</span> <span word="thenation">thenation</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="slump">slump</span>. <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="creativity">creativity</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="positively">positively</span> <span word="influenced">influenced</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="worldhappened">worldhappened</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="recently">recently</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="introduction">introduction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="hybrid">hybrid</span> <span word="cars">cars</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="rely">rely</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="asmuch">asmuch</span> <span word="oil">oil</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="operate">operate</span>, <span word="using">using</span> <span word="alternative">alternative</span> <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="sources">sources</span> <span word="instead">instead</span>.<span word="Without">Without</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="creative">creative</span> <span word="minds">minds</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="invention">invention</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="cars">cars</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="rely">rely</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="muchon">muchon</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="oil">oil</span> <span word="reserves">reserves</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="fuel">fuel</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="eventually">eventually</span> <span word="run">run</span> <span word="out">out</span>. <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="creativity">creativity</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="worldhas">worldhas</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="sources">sources</span>.</p>
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