托福作文批改：Learning English
<p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="haven">haven</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="from">from</span> “<span word="get">get</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="at">at</span> 6:30” <span word="to">to</span> “<span word="get">get</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="at">at</span> 7:00”, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="can">can</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="at">at</span> 7:39 <span word="this">this</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="heard">heard</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="alarm">alarm</span> <span word="ringed">ringed</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="since">since</span> 6:50. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="frustrated">frustrated</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="finally">finally</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="overslept">overslept</span> <span word="again">again</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="again">again</span>. <span word="Get">Get</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="why">why</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="it">it</span>?!</p><p><span word="With">With</span> <span word="frustration">frustration</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="started">started</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="day">day</span>.</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="task">task</span>: <span word="review">review</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="words">words</span> <span word="for">for</span> 25 <span word="minutes">minutes</span>.</p><p><span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="good">good</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fully">fully</span> <span word="concentrated">concentrated</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="finished">finished</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span> <span word="way">way</span>.</p><p><span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="start">start</span>, <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cheer">cheer</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="bit">bit</span>.</p><p><span word="However">However</span> <span word="the">the</span> “<span word="calling">calling</span> <span word="apple">apple</span> <span word="customer">customer</span> <span word="service">service</span>” <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="completely">completely</span> <span word="destroyed">destroyed</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="day">day</span>.</p><p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="waiting">waiting</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hour">hour</span>, <span word="finally">finally</span> <span word="someone">someone</span> <span word="picked">picked</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="up">up</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="kept">kept</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="can">can</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="hear">hear</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="speaking">speaking</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="loudly">loudly</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="me">me</span>! <span word="I">I</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="pissed">pissed</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="badly">badly</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="hour">hour</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="stupid">stupid</span> <span word="customer">customer</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="line">line</span>. <span word="Actually">Actually</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="worse">worse</span>! <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="waiting">waiting</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="another">another</span> 2 <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="already">already</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="phone">phone</span>!</p><p><span word="It">It</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="ridiculous">ridiculous</span>! <span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="suffering">suffering</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="suffering">suffering</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="solving">solving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>.</p><p><span word="Maybe">Maybe</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="emotional">emotional</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="can">can</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="straight">straight</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="calm">calm</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="things">things</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="worse">worse</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="emotional">emotional</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="affect">affect</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span>.</p>
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