避免托福写作句子冗长的三种方法
<p> 根据国外学者的调查统计,一个以句号结尾的英语句子,单词的数量最好不要超过20个,否则的话,句子偏长,听话人的注意力有可能不集中,漏听一、两个单词,从而影响对整个句子的理解。为了避免句子冗长,通常采取两种办法,一种是将一个长句子,划分为几个短句子,每个短句子之间有语气上的停顿,让听话人有间歇的感觉,另外一种则是简化句子的单词构成,用一些简单的单词,代替一些复杂的单词。下面我就给各位介绍三种常用的简化方法。</p><p> 第一种方法是用一个单词代替一组意义相同的单词,比如:</p><p> ①用<span word="forget">forget</span>(忘记)代替<span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="remember">remember</span>(没有记住)</p><p> ②用<span word="ignore">ignore</span>(忽视)代替<span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span>(不注意)</p><p> ③用<span word="now">now</span>(现在)代替<span word="at">at</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="time">time</span>(此时此刻)</p><p> ④用<span word="because">because</span>(由于)代替<span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span>(鉴于下列事实)</p><p> 第二种方法是省略同义词或近义词,比如在下面例句中,形容词<span word="important">important</span>(重要的)和<span word="significant">significant</span>(有重要意义的),就是两个同义词(也可以说是近义词),我们可以省略<span word="important">important</span>,只保留<span word="significant">significant</span>。</p><p> ①<span word="The">The</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="significant">significant</span>.(这项政府计划是重要的,有重要意义。)</p><p> ②<span word="The">The</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="significant">significant</span>.(这项政府计划有重要意义。)</p>
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